Late catching up, but I'm so glad not to have missed this. It was beautifully paced, with the slow development mostly revealed through perfect dialogue. As others have already said, the 'future continuous' was a lovely touch and made me smile at the end of what was otherwise a pretty tense read! It would have been so easy for this kind of scenario to descend into mushiness, but you got the balance just right between them (especially Bodie) saying what needed to be said while still staying in character - particularly the semi-hysterical giggling, which was so convincing.
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Date: 2007-04-11 09:24 am (UTC)Loved it.