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A little Christmas story - Part two

Ray slammed the receiver down. "Know what the Cow did?" he asked while turning to Bodie. "Don't say it, Ray. He didn't cancel our Christmas leave, did he?" "Oh yeah, he did. There is a threat against Mrs. Cronchester and she asked if, no she insisted that you and me should be the lucky ones to guard her." They looked each other in the eyes.

"So let's have our Christmas eve now", Bodie mentioned. Doyle beamed. "Yeah, let's move the armchairs and decorate the tree."

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"Okay Bodie, go fetch the ladder while I take the decorations out of the cupboard."


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Doyle took the most loved items and placed them on the coffee table

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when Bodie entered the room with the ladder.

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"Ok, let's start with the light." He climbed up the ladder and began to wrap the lights around the tree.

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When he was finished, Doyle turned on the lights and they started decorating the tree.



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Fifteen minutes later they were finished and Bodie took the ladder out and went to get the presents he had gotten for Doyle. When he came back Doyle was sitting on the settee, but there was no gift to be seen. Had Doyle forgotten to buy some?

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He went and put the larger one under the tree, then gave the second one to Doyle.

"What is it?" Doyle tore up the paper. "Oh Bodie, that's great", he smiled when he saw the artist paint set full with tubes of every colour.

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"Go and open the other one, while I have a glass of chamapgne." Doyle went to the tree and started to tear up paper again.

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"You bought me a carpet, mate?" he asked with a little uncertainty.

"Well, I thought it might be useful under your easel. Or did you love the lecture you got from the Cow the last time you dropped paint all over the carpet in your last flat? Remember, this very expensive carpet was only twenty years old."

Doyle laughed, threw himself into Bodie's arms and claimed some kisses.



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"And don't you think I have forgotten your present. But I didn't have enough paper to wrap it up." Doyle vanished behind the settee only to come back with one of the most wonderful gifts Bodie had ever got from anyone.

"It's a sledge, Ray! How did you know I wanted to have my own sledge my whole life?" "Oh, I know you, my love. You're a big child."

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"Let us go outside and have a ride."

They went outside and had a lot of fun.

"As a child I always loved it to ride down the hill lying on my belly." "So let's do it."

The lay belly down on the sledge, Ray on top of Bodie (because that was always one of their favourite positions)

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They went down the hill and at the end the sledge turned over and they landed in the snow. They were laughing so hard that it was really difficult for them to get up and go home.

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"Go, put the sledge into the garage, I'll go inside and open the next bottle of champagne", Doyle said and went inside. When Bodie entered the flat he made big eyes. There was a fur carpet on the floor and on this carpet was one Ray Doyle with a ribbon around his waist.

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"Close your mouth, mate. You were so sad when your last fur spread burned with your old flat that I thought you needed a new one. And then I saw this wonderful fur carpet and I decided to buy it because I never made love on a fur carpet before. Come here, love."

Bodie didn't need a second invitation, leaped forward and into the waiting arms of his love.

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The End.

Merry Christmas and to all a good time from me and the lads

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Please don't hesitate to tell me if I wrote something wrong, either spelling or grammar. This little piece is done without a beta.

Oh, and it would be nice if it could go to Pros lib but I think that might be a little difficult. :-)

Date: 2018-12-19 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
What a sweet story! And brilliant use of all the props - I especially like the tiny sledge, did you make it yourself? It's perfect! Wow, you took so much care to create this story and the result is a lovely present to all of us. Thank you!!!!

Date: 2018-12-19 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cim3745.livejournal.com

*g* lovely, dear. :-)  it wasn't easy to create the sleigh, was it ?  But your Story fits perfectly to our lads.
Thank you for your great work. Did you ruin your carpet or flat with that special snow ? Will you still find it next Christmas ? I think so :-)

Date: 2018-12-19 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
Aww, lovely story and absolutely brilliant staged scenes. It's really marvelous. All the little details! And our lads celebrating together. *g* Thank you so much!

Date: 2018-12-19 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milomaus.livejournal.com
Hee, great story! Love and action and a sledge and snow! That's perfect!

Date: 2018-12-19 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com
Such a sweet Christmas story. And so well done – the baubles, the sleigh, the Christmas tree and the champagne!
The snow is perfect too! :-)

Date: 2018-12-19 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
You demonstrate great care, patience, eye for detail and imagination in creating this sweet world of Bodie and Doyle! Your post is a real pleasure. Thank you and merry Christmas to you, too!

Date: 2018-12-19 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airelle1.livejournal.com
As always, absolutely lovely story and lovely Little Lads! I love the details in your dioramas, they are really stunning, and I'm amazed to learn you made the sledge yourself. Your lads must be really tiny if you made the sledge with matchsticks, can I ask how high they are? As you'll see on December 30, I'll also post pics from my dioramas, but mine are big, Barbie-size (like Francis Kerst ones). Yours look so tiny and lovely! I think I'm in love with your lads... Thank you for sharing them with us.

Date: 2018-12-20 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com
If you could assemble it into an htm or a pdf file we could give it a try. It would be great to have it available!

Frances
Proslib business: proslib at gmail dot com
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/proslib
hagsrus at livejournal / dreamwidth / AO3




Date: 2018-12-20 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
*happy sigh* :-)
This really is a lovely story! I have tears in my eyes...

Merry Christmas, my dear!

Date: 2018-12-20 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
That was so darned adorable! I love it! Thank you for all your hard work giving Bodie and Doyle the Christmas they deserved!

Date: 2018-12-20 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com
Oh that was so lovely and a beautiful 2nd part of this little Christmas story. I am in awe at all the minute details you are able to create and include. And how inspired was using matches for the sledge and creating Bodie's ladder yourself (very realistic, both!).
Bodie's an eternal big child, isn't he? And at Christmas even more! And I love Doyle's utter enthusiasm for getting an artist set as a present. Lovely, thoughtful gifts all around.
And them playing in the snow, how perfect.
Thank you so much.
Wishing you and your family a happy Christmas
P x

Date: 2018-12-20 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ali15son.livejournal.com
a lovely story, thankyou.

Date: 2018-12-20 07:57 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] krisserci5.livejournal.com
wonderful story and pictures, they go so well together! Thank you! Happy holidays =0

Date: 2018-12-20 09:15 am (UTC)

Date: 2018-12-20 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilda-elise.livejournal.com
So cute! I love doll stories, and yours was really lovely. But the sled reminded me of this, my own story of dolls and sleds.

https://gilda-elise.livejournal.com/44448.html

Date: 2018-12-20 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
A perfect part 2 to you story. I'm amazed at the creativity and all the small but important details you put into this! The ending is perfect - but do the lads know you've got pictures of them...well...doing...each other! ;-)

This was terrific! Thank you.

Best wishes for the holidays!

Date: 2018-12-21 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loxleyprince.livejournal.com
Oh look at the little lads all Christmas-y with their tree and presents and champagne! i so glad they got their Christmas together!
Well done, you! :-)

Date: 2018-12-21 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siskiou.livejournal.com
Sweet! And so many details! Your Bodie and Doyle sure made the best of it, despite Cowley!

Date: 2018-12-21 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] franciskerst.livejournal.com
Lovely! You did a fine job (said Mr Cowley ...) Wait, maybe he wouldn't use the word "lovely"; so, "excellent, you've won a wee dram of my 16 years old Laphroaig!"
Edited Date: 2018-12-21 08:55 pm (UTC)

Date: 2018-12-22 11:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airelle1.livejournal.com
Hi again! Couldn't answer yesterday because I was away from home and I forgot to put DIALJ on my phone.
Your lads are 1/24th scale, it's tiny indeed. I have a 1/12th dollhouse (not suitable for my 1/6th scale lads) and it's small already! I'm trying to build a 1/24 room with a Christmas tree, you may be able to see it if I manage to do it for my post, on December 30. It will be a gift for Bodie, the eternal child, from his Doyle, to put as a decoration in their garden. Hope I can manage to do it without glueing myself to the little bits of the room, LOL.
Anyway, thanks again for your wonderful post, and long live the Lads!

Date: 2018-12-22 06:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] smirra.livejournal.com
Awww yes, that's a lovely inside documentary of the lads Christmar celebrations! The snow, the preparations, that brings me in the mood for Christmas. Thank you!

Date: 2018-12-30 06:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cyanne
Aww, so cute. You did an amazing job with all the details, the sledge, the ladder, the rugs. Love the idea of them having an early Christmas together and they are just so adorable. Love the line about their favourite position. *g*

Date: 2018-12-31 10:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com
I like this - a very christmassy story, and such a lot of detail in the pictures. Must have been hard work, but it's paid off. Thank you!

Date: 2019-01-07 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness, how did I miss this post?! (Okay, I see it was two days after I moved house. Things were a bit chaotic then, cos I'd had to go back to work too....) But I've just been checking the tags and doing the links, and suddenly here were the lads having a gorgeous Christmas together. The perfect late present. *g* That was so cute - and so detailed! *g* Well done, you!

Date: 2019-01-11 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sw33n3y.livejournal.com
More fabulous Christmas fun! I'm amazed at the detail you manage to get in the settings. Their lounge room looked quite cozy, and the Christmas atmosphere really shone through. Nice work!

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