[identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
After two hours of frantically search, Bodie discovered Doyle's car near a condemned house. When he heard the shot, he threw himself to the ground.

Nebel zweia.png

Some seconds later he heard a low whistle and turned around. There was Doyle walking through the driveway while the sun broke through the fog. He knew then it would be a good morning.

Doyle in Toreinfahrt Nebel1.png

Date: 2019-01-27 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
Oh, I like this little snippet with pictures. Nice job here. Thanks!

Date: 2019-01-27 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Oh, definitely a good morning! Very nice - thank you! *g*

Date: 2019-01-28 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
Hehe! This is a very nice little fog picture story!

Phew! :-)

Date: 2019-01-28 07:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ali15son.livejournal.com
very nice images, thankyou.

Date: 2019-01-28 07:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
Somehow this morning I keep wishing we had books of their adventures, when we have such great material for the illustrations pages! :-)

Date: 2019-01-28 11:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miwahni.livejournal.com
I like what you've done with those pictures, very atmospheric.

Date: 2019-01-28 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
13 AGAIN?????!!!!

Date: 2019-01-28 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
Where was I......?

I really like your interpretation of the challenge, so creative. Thank you!

Date: 2019-01-28 05:47 pm (UTC)

Date: 2019-01-28 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
I'm sure it means GOOD luck! :-)

Date: 2019-01-28 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com
Yes! I love what you've done here. Very evocative story and pictures :)

Date: 2019-01-28 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
You're welcome and just to let you know I have written to you.

Date: 2019-01-30 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sw33n3y.livejournal.com
These are both very atmospheric! Nice work!

Date: 2019-01-30 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sagittas.livejournal.com
Nice little graphic tale. And despite the same basic effect the first image has an apocalyptic atmosphere and the second one a more supernatural taste.
I would say even two more other different stories to think about... ;-)

Date: 2019-01-30 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
Very nicely done!

Date: 2019-01-30 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sagittas.livejournal.com
You're welcome and thank you, but there are already so many good writers around here. So...if they feel like to take the pleasant task, I'm sure we would both be pleased to read more stories :-)

Date: 2019-02-04 04:57 pm (UTC)
cyanne: (Pros Bodie & Doyle)
From: [personal profile] cyanne
Perfect take on the prompt and it's amazing how emotions can change so quickly.

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