Wow!! Hot stuff, Rebel. I love that voyeuristic tone that you set up, the 'game' that Bodie is drawn to but unsure of, trying to be turned on by the girl, but all the while his eyes never leaving Ray - so sultry, and full of possibility. And no apologies - you worked the programme in beautifully. I had a great giggle at this:
At least he’d tried to use the back of the programme, rather than smearing it all over HRH’s face. That wouldn’t do at all.
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Date: 2007-06-13 12:26 pm (UTC)At least he’d tried to use the back of the programme, rather than smearing it all over HRH’s face. That wouldn’t do at all.
Could *definitely* stand a sequel..
Thanks Rebel, a treat!