I enjoyed this very much, apart from having a great way with words I liked your eye for detail.
And running the risk of seeming very sexist here, I loved passages like the following and the way you show Bodie's mercenary side - the way he typically relegates Andy to something which is little more than their plaything - but it's funny too:
He could always do something with the top half of Andy, if Ray was concentrating on the bottom. But the moment he shifted in his chair, Ray’s head came up, clear warning in his eyes.
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Date: 2007-06-15 04:36 pm (UTC)And running the risk of seeming very sexist here, I loved passages like the following and the way you show Bodie's mercenary side - the way he typically relegates Andy to something which is little more than their plaything - but it's funny too:
He could always do something with the top half of Andy, if Ray was concentrating on the bottom. But the moment he shifted in his chair, Ray’s head came up, clear warning in his eyes.
Very nicely done and thanks for sharing.