This was a really good approach to the story. Your POV was great, very believable for a teenager not quite an adult, but not a child any longer. Loved her view and thoughts on Doyle and Butch. This line made me giggle: I didn't know who Cowley was, but he must be fearsome to make Butch hop it like that.
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Date: 2007-06-13 11:36 pm (UTC)I didn't know who Cowley was, but he must be fearsome to make Butch hop it like that.
Thanks.