This was fun--tense action, lovely partner worry, a real sense of place and time...and a cool depiction of their developing relationship. Oh, and hot sex, too. *g* Terrific! And here you were, so worried.... I really liked all the silent communication between them, the growing understanding. As Doyle wonders, what will they be like in a few more years? Lovely.
And I really liked Bodie nudging Doyle with a mud-splattered shoulder. I don't know why, but...yeah. *g* Thank you!
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Date: 2007-06-20 11:03 pm (UTC)This was fun--tense action, lovely partner worry, a real sense of place and time...and a cool depiction of their developing relationship. Oh, and hot sex, too. *g* Terrific! And here you were, so worried.... I really liked all the silent communication between them, the growing understanding. As Doyle wonders, what will they be like in a few more years? Lovely.
And I really liked Bodie nudging Doyle with a mud-splattered shoulder. I don't know why, but...yeah. *g* Thank you!