Date: 2007-07-13 02:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you for a wonderful, entertaining read! Thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish. Loved the banter, the thread of uncertainty Bodie has to work through concerning his past and how much to tell Doyle, the references to Corrie, etc, the humour, the IRA backstory - you do it all brilliantly here. And I love that confrontation between Jane and her Mum that ends with the crockery being broken, just priceless.

A lot of favourite bits here, but I did enjoy this thought of Bodie's: Maybe he’d already set down roots of some sort, without even realising it. Built his own cage and moved in.

Undercut beautifully by our Ray, of course..

“Are you coming?” demanded Doyle, breaking into his thoughts.

“Keep your knickers on,” said Bodie, as he hurried to catch up. Of all the impatient, bad-tempered sods in the word to find himself yoked to…


Heh-heh..
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