I can't help feeling a teensy bit sorry for Jane, but only for a second *g* Really enjoyed the story, and the drawings gave it a wonderful atmosphere. I love the way they made me "see" the whole thing. Ditto Sheila's comment about your description of Doyle ... Sometimes in the knee if he was feeling stroppy ... and oh yes, he does have the ability to wound Bodie deeply. Glad he didn't though! Thanks for this, a really fab response to the challenge.
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Date: 2007-09-14 11:21 am (UTC)