Drabble - again!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Dammit, this seems to be catching! Ok, this one is a bit out of context I fear but it jumped me while I was shopping (of all things) and I thought I give it a try. Doyle's POV yet again - seems I just can't get Bodie's *sigh*




Close Call

Standing over his wrecked bike he thought he could feel steam coming out of his ears. He was so close to punching Bodie through the next wall as he’d never been before. It wasn’t even because of the bike. Sod that, the bike could be repaired. It was the fact that the reckless bastard could have had himself killed. Leaving him out in the cold all on his own. And that he would never be able to forgive him. He meets Bodie’s defensive glare and suddenly all anger vanishes like thin air. Bodie’s alive and that’s really all that counts.

Comments

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

Out of context? Seems perfectly in context to me. It's a drabble, and it's about B&D. It's also very sweet! Thank you!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Just thought it's not a closed or complete thing in itself... if you know what I mean.

[angel-ci5.livejournal.com]

Hurray for shopping, providing this gorgeous drabble!
I love this, Doyle so angry because he could've lost Bodie, thank you!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Lol, thanks a lot. I hate shopping that's why I usually let my mind wander while doing it (you should see what ends up in my cart now and then...). I wonder what the girl at the cash register thought when I suddenly snapped my fingers and started grinning like a loony *shakes head*

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Hey, take the inspiration where you can get it! This is perfectly in context and a complete little moment. Well done!

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

I know what you mean, but I think it's complete. You took us right through Doyle's emotional turmoil to a conclusion. Don't need much more story than that! :-)

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you like that little moment *G*

And I love your icon!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Aww - love the moment of realisation that calms him down at the end... *g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Yay, thanks! Wasn't sure if it came through like that.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Sometimes one got to set priorities, even Doyle *G*

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

And I love your icon! It's a lovely shot and effect, isn't it? Made by the very talented empty_mirrors

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

It's absolutely fantastic.

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

Yeah, bikes can be fixed. And he can always get Bodie to hold his screwdriver *G*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

ROFL!!! You naughty, naughty girl!

[nakeisha.livejournal.com]

The last sentence says it all.

So Doyle.

Lovely.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thanks! It really does, doesn't it?

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Hmmm. Seems just fine to be. I liked it. Thanks!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Yay, I'm so glad to hear that! Thanks!

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

I love it when they get all cross and defensive about each other. Very nice, thank you!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I love their fierce protectiveness of each other too.

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Oh I think we all know these moments. You're so angry that they could be so careless, but when they're right there in front of you and safe, it all fades into the background.

Well done and thank you, and thank you for sharing this. :)

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

That's exactly what I meant when I wrote this - thanks for putting it into words and even more thanks for your thanks... er...

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

Great! And not out of context.
I'm glad other people get hit by plot bunnies when they're shopping, but it does make me look at my fellow shoppers in a new, considering, way...

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I get the weirdest ideas while shopping. And you're right, you know? I wonder what others are plotting about...

[magnifica7.livejournal.com]

Thank you for sharing your drabbles - very fine reads! :)