Drabble - Tamper

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

They sneak out of the do early, the girls giggling. Bodie wants to throttle both of them, especially when Christie shoots him a gloating look over Ray's shoulder. A thrown gauntlet, and Bodie's never backed down from a fight yet.

By the time the girls get back from ten minutes in the loo, Bodie's finished. Ray's tie is gone, his collar's open exposing a length of neck marked with faint bruises, his lips are swollen bee-stung pink and his pupils are blown wide, turning his eyes into limpid shadowed wells.

Christie glares. Bodie smiles beatifically back.

Game, set and match.

NB: Tamper - to interfere inappropriately with someone

Comments

[magenta-blue.livejournal.com]

Christie never had a chance... I wonder how Ray would respond *g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

LOL, poor Doyle being reduced to a trophy - evil! But then again Bodie might just have marked his property. And very effectively too.

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

Oh my! Definitely "interfering inappropriately"! Poor Ray, he doesn't seem to know what hit him. I especially adore the phrase, "his pupils blown wide". Wonderful!

[probodie.livejournal.com]

*SNIGGER* Goooo Bodie! Glad he beat her!!!

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Love the imagery of a Doyle that doesn't quite know what's hit him. And for some reason, the 'pupils blown wide' is the hottest image of all!

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

Heh, Bodie vs Christie, no contest. Glad he stood up and was counted though, didn't let the giggler get her mitts on Ray. And yes we love the pupils line, it's stunning *g*

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Well, Ray was awake and willing, obviously. So good riddance, Christie. *g* Thank you for letting Bodie win.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh... just... good! *g*

[miwahni.livejournal.com]

How can 100 words be so hot without actually getting smutty? Lovely job!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

LOL God help Bodie when he's least expecting it, I expect.

Thanks!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

:D Thank you!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

That sentence was my starting point. It kinda grabbed me too :D

Thank you!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

But of course. He's not met a woman he couldn't cockblock yet, though Ann came close. :D

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

:D Thank you!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

LOL And thank you.

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

:D Much happier prompt. LOL

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com]

Bodie is pretty wicked sometimes, isn't he? Bet he just loved that (Ray loved it too, come to think of it. Was probably only chatting Christie up to get Bodie's reaction). Lovely - thank you!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Oh I can so see that smug, self-satisfied smile on Bodie's face. Although, I have a feeling that later Bodie is going to get wither beaten within an inch of his life, or ravaged beautifully. :)

Thank you and thanks for sharing this moment with us. :)

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

Great work - missing out everything explicit in order to give us an entire scene in a hundred words and managing to place all the missed out stuff in our heads anyway!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

And thank you!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

LOL, yeah, Bodie'd better watch his back. Thank you!

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

:D Thanks!

[magnifica7.livejournal.com]

This and your other drabbles are excellent! :)