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[solosundance.livejournal.com]

A flying jar of marmite nearly sent Doyle over the edge. It catapulted out of the black hole of Bodie’s kitchen cupboard and shattered at his feet.

“No need to throw it on the floor,” came a drawl. “Just unscrew the lid.”

“I’ll unscrew your lid,” Doyle growled, arriving back at the bed. Unthinkable words tumbled out of his mouth. “This isn’t working, Bodie.”

“No,” Bodie agreed. He shut his eyes and hoped for the best. “So move in.”

Doyle had the cupboard safely stacked by ten o’clock.

They made their first anniversary with ease. And every anniversary that followed.

Comments

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

Aw, that was adorable! Thanks!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

So nice. Bodie figured Doyle was staying, so he might as well -- stay. I love a happy ending. Thank you.

[miwahni.livejournal.com]

That is so sweet! Thank you.

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

:cackles loudly: Only you could build a drabble and a pivotal relationship moment around a jar of marmite! I *loved* this, especially Bodie's drawl and Doyle's response to it. Brilliant.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

*Snicker* That's sooo 100% them. I always thought Doyle was the one with the organization talent. Thanks for another great drabble.

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

LOL. Cute!

[heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com]

This is adorable! Brave Bodie, closing his eyes and jumping .... and of course letting Ray take over; it's a tiny thing but important when each of them learns to let the other take over in something like this - like a real relationship. They're both so spikily independent in some ways, it's great that they can learn to dovetail their lives together - and love it! Thank you for this!

[nakeisha.livejournal.com]

*Giggle*

Nice.

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Oh perfect! You stopped my heart for amoment there with Doyle's - “This isn’t working, Bodie.”

The brought it back with Bodie's response. I love the whole thing especially Bodie's “No need to throw it on the floor,” came a drawl. “Just unscrew the lid.”

Thank you so much for this. :)

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

More kitchen fic! And based around the spread you either love or hate! Grat stuff! Your drabble, too!!!

[justacat.livejournal.com]

I'd throw the marmite on the floor, too! *g* But I like this - esp B shutting his eyes and hoping for the best.

And would you like it archived?

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

thanks, I had a pivotal relationship moment over marmite myself, so I couldn't resist *g* And yes please I'd like it archived:

Title: Marmite
Author: JoJo
Gen or slash: Slash B/D
Disclaimer: Not mine
Notes: this can be archived with the other drabble titled: Reciprocal

Thanks!

[magnifica7.livejournal.com]

I love your drabbles! :)