I am not much of a drabble fan - but I love this! I kept coming back to it! Now I want you to write the story that goes with it! *g*
It's like you say up there...sometimes they need to be beaten about the head a bit before they realize. I can read lots of scenarios, but my favorites are those in which they're getting it on (read: fucking *g*) very early, but the commitment, etc., don't come until later - takes them a while to see/accept/come to terms with that - admit it to themselves, whatever. *That's* the conflict I like to read, the issue I see - not them getting together, but them getting *together*.
(You know, I wish we'd had a chance to talk about Redemption at ZCon! Darn! I think you need to come through DC on your way home! *g*)
Anyway, very nice - and I like the title you chose, too...
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Date: 2007-09-25 01:47 am (UTC)It's like you say up there...sometimes they need to be beaten about the head a bit before they realize. I can read lots of scenarios, but my favorites are those in which they're getting it on (read: fucking *g*) very early, but the commitment, etc., don't come until later - takes them a while to see/accept/come to terms with that - admit it to themselves, whatever. *That's* the conflict I like to read, the issue I see - not them getting together, but them getting *together*.
(You know, I wish we'd had a chance to talk about Redemption at ZCon! Darn! I think you need to come through DC on your way home! *g*)
Anyway, very nice - and I like the title you chose, too...