Argh. Fifteen thousand words into a DiaG story that shows no signs of stopping -- or, worse, coherency. Ooh, but it's exciting from this end of it! Go on, go work some more on it. *g* (I bet it's more coherent than you think.) You and I are, I think, in sync with the characters--and you give us great action, and that balance between the emotional arc and plot. It's a combination that I crave--it gives me what I see on the screen with extra benefits *g*. So, you know, I can't wait. (Besides, I'm tired of struggling with my own idea for justacat's new zine. Arrgh, indeed.)
It was a great opening hook, wasn't it? I'm not very good at those so I'm pleased I did it for once! *g*
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Date: 2007-11-12 05:23 pm (UTC)Ooh, but it's exciting from this end of it! Go on, go work some more on it. *g* (I bet it's more coherent than you think.) You and I are, I think, in sync with the characters--and you give us great action, and that balance between the emotional arc and plot. It's a combination that I crave--it gives me what I see on the screen with extra benefits *g*. So, you know, I can't wait. (Besides, I'm tired of struggling with my own idea for
It was a great opening hook, wasn't it? I'm not very good at those so I'm pleased I did it for once! *g*