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What can I say?? Err, lovely? No, I mean yes, it is! I loved the way you conveyed, so exactly, Bodie's utter exhaustion at the beginning, that phrase "Now he lay, heavy as the world," - so precise - I could almost feel it! And the fireworks and explosions threaded through the whole piece, and this phrase "until his veins ran silver heat, and there were fireworks all the way through his body".
Lovely!