[identity profile] hambelandjemima.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
 Following on from [personal profile] corvidology(because someone has to). This starts with 'stupid'.

Bodie might not mean to say this. But he means what he says :D




“Stupid and moronic? That amounts to the same thing, doesn’t it?”

 

“You know what I mean, you dumb crud. What were you thinking? What if I hadn’t—?”

 

“But you did, Ray.”

 

“Yeah, but what if—?”

 

“What if? Listen, mate, I’ll argue with Cowley the rights and wrongs of sending us on assignments. I’ll challenge Macklin to a one on one with no holds barred. Hell, I’ll even book myself a psychiatric evaluation with the lovely Dr. Ross. But I will never ask ‘what if Ray hadn’t been there?’ because it will never happen, sunshine. You’ll always be there.”

Date: 2008-04-19 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draycevixen.livejournal.com
Hmm...looks at name in same line with stupid *ponders* :D

Actually, its lovely and romantic and VERY much in character... I have to admit that the combination of those things is where the "melty spine" bit lies for me! ♥ from a puddle of goo...

Date: 2008-04-20 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunray45.livejournal.com
I can just hear Bodie saying those words. Such trust in his partner. It is lovely to know that someone will always be there for you.

I really enjoyed that. Thank you.

Date: 2008-04-20 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
This was just so nice. I love my lads relying on each other. Thanks.

Date: 2008-04-20 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
*Melts into a wobbly puddle* I love it how much they rely on each other and never have any doubts about the other being there. *happy sigh*

Date: 2008-04-20 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bistokids.livejournal.com
Aaaaah, lovely!

Is this the romantic moment that you were feeling so ashamed of? Or is there something deeply sappy I haven't got to yet? Because this doesn't feel overly slushy - it's pitched just right. Just a wonderful little moment of acknowledgement of what is between them. :D

Date: 2008-04-20 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Not overly romantic at all. You kept enough bite there in the tone of it, so it worked nicely - well done!

Date: 2008-04-20 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draycevixen.livejournal.com

I think she may have gone ♥ romantic ♥ to counter-balance me. I have that strange affect on people, I can't figure out why... *bats eyelashes*

Date: 2008-04-25 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halotolerant.livejournal.com
This rings very true and has great pacing. I am swiftly getting addicted to this drabbletree thing! :D

Date: 2008-04-25 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halotolerant.livejournal.com
Oh, I hope so! Last weekend was utter massacre as far as my free time went, but this weekend has a few nice clear periods! :D

I like all your drabbles in this challenge, but I felt a bit foolish at the thought of spamming you with comments as I'm currently too sleepy to be very original. Suffice it to say I still love the way you write the boys :D

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