May Day! Part Four.
May. 3rd, 2008 10:53 pm“No it’s not,” Bodie agreed, smirking. “I always say your best asset is your—”
“Thank you, 3.7,” Cowley interrupted, dryly, and turned his attention to both men. “It’s hardly a laughing matter. With the annual budget due for renewal next month, the last thing I need is a scandal to queer up the system.”
Bodie sniggered, which turned into a cough as he felt his boss’s eyes burn into him.
“There wasn’t a note with them, sir?” Doyle asked, ignoring Bodie in case he started giggling like the girl he most definitely wasn’t. He turned the envelope over in his hands, looking for some clue as to who could have sent it.
“No, that’s all there was. And there were no prints on anything either, before you ask,” Cowley replied, pre-empting Doyle’s next question. He went on, briskly, “You have one week, gentlemen, to find out who took these photographs and what they intend to do with them. All without bringing the department into disrepute any more than you usually do. I’ll have your IDs and armoury now.”
Five guns and two knives were deposited in the duffle bag Cowley held open, along with two CI5 IDs. He secured the bag and hesitated before holding out a hand.
“Good luck…. Doyle,” he said.
Surprised, Doyle looked at his partner and received a puzzled shrug in reply. He gripped the older man’s hand in a firm handshake. “Thank you, sir,” he managed to say.
Cowley turned to Bodie who took the proffered hand with some reluctance.
“Good luck, Bodie.”
“Thank you, sir.”
Doyle half expected to see a salute from the ex-Para, so rigid was his stance.
They watched the Old Man limp away to the red Granada that was waiting silently by the gates.
Bodie leaned into Doyle, shoulders brushing together.
“Did he just…?”
“Yeah, I think he did.”
“But he called me by my name,” Bodie said, incredulously, shaking his head. “Things are bad, mate.”
“Yeah.” Doyle looked around him. “I don’t know about you, but I feel kind of exposed—”
He caught sight of Bodie leering at his crotch, and finished off, “— without my gun.” He punched Bodie on the upper arm without malice. “You must have something stashed away somewhere?”
“Yeah. Rifles, a machine gun, one revolver. That’s all. We’ll need to get kitted out. Can you get your hands on some serious cash?”
Doyle nodded, frowning. “Where are we going?”
Bodie kept his face expressionless. “To see Marty Martell.”
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Date: 2008-05-04 12:04 am (UTC)Now, if I was at home I would claim the next part, but seeing as I'm not...I wont. Unless I get home and no one has claimed it...LOL
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Date: 2008-05-04 04:16 am (UTC)OYS!!!! -- you know the shorthand! *eg*
in case he started giggling like the girl he most definitely wasn’t. ♥
so where was that fifth gun?See their you go entertaining us AND moving the plot right along.
Thank you!
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Date: 2008-05-04 07:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-04 08:14 am (UTC)I've never done a Round Robin before. It's interesting to explore what someone else has written and then try to lay the foundations for someone else.
I thought I'd jump in early, because then I can sit back smugly later and say 'well, I've done my bit
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Date: 2008-05-04 08:20 am (UTC)The fifth gun was hidden in a place that only B&D knew about, although Bodie had told Doyle about it should an emergency, erm, arise. Being the gentleman he is, Cowley turned his back while it was being retrieved.Plot? What plot?
Glad you liked ;) Thanks ♥
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Date: 2008-05-04 08:26 am (UTC)I forgot about the grenades. They're probably not CI5 issue *g*
Get to work. I have no idea what you're doing but I'm sure it'll be good :)
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Date: 2008-05-04 11:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-04 12:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-04 02:38 pm (UTC)Yes, that's exactly what I intended with that emphasis! *eg*
Still love that "not a girl" bit. ♥
all I could think about was that bit in Doctor Who where naked Jack suddenly produces a gunno subject
Date: 2008-05-04 02:39 pm (UTC)As Schnuffi is always saying about me, "don't encourage her!"
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Date: 2008-05-04 03:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-04 07:01 pm (UTC)I thought you might like the 'not a girl' reference ♥
*nods* It's difficult to erase that image. Not that I've tried very hard.no subject
Date: 2008-05-04 07:02 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-04 07:03 pm (UTC)Glad you're enjoying it so far :)
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Date: 2008-05-04 07:05 pm (UTC)Thanks for commenting.
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Date: 2008-05-04 08:28 pm (UTC)Falling behind, Hambel. I've already established two of her boundary limits... nun's habits and Cowley.
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Date: 2008-05-05 02:28 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-05 06:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-06 11:20 pm (UTC)Just a suggestion, but if you're going to RR for the whole month of May, it might be a good idea to set a time limit on how long each segment can sit unclaimed before people who've already had a go can jump in... Maybe 24 hours? Just a thought. It's really easy to lose momentum on these things -- experience speaking here -- as they drop off people's flists...
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Date: 2008-05-07 07:21 am (UTC)If you fancy writing some more, wait until it seems as if everyone else who wants to has had a turn, and then feel free to claim another section.
I tend to trust in people's common sense - if no one's claimed for 24 hours (or even 12, perhaps 6 - depends how active the place looks) then feel free to claim away. If it ends up being completely written by just a few people, well, that's the nature of the beast!
It seems to be extra strangely quiet out there right now, Pros-lj-wise. The last round robin started off as open for just a couple of days, had a positive slew of entries, and ended up lasting a week or more. This one - like pulling teeth even to get the first response!
I know there could be lots of reasons, but I'm hoping it's not because people at a Pros Yahoo group were recently very critical of people writing shorter pieces for
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Date: 2008-05-07 07:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-07 11:07 am (UTC)I also wonder if we didn't back ourselves into a plot corner really fast with the relationship confirmed... Not that I did anything to help create that situation *whistles*
I don't know how long that took last time... I could attempt to simplify, if you think that might help.
The complaints about the length of stories seems a little narrow minded.
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Date: 2008-05-07 12:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-07 12:44 pm (UTC)*heaves huge sigh of relief that she didn't kill the RR*
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Date: 2008-05-07 09:57 pm (UTC)Thanks!
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Date: 2008-05-08 04:25 am (UTC)*goes off to read next parts*