Day 14: Fic “Trapped”
Dec. 14th, 2008 11:35 amHello. So first off I must apologise, because the fic I originally wrote for this Challenge, I decided to scrap yesterday. As a result, I'm afraid I have this rather brief offering instead.
Massive thanks to
byslantedlight for the beta, any mistakes are down to me.
Trapped
by Angelci5
"How much longer?" Doyle strutted across the cellar floor to where there was a small dirty window just above his head. He jumped up and grabbed the brick ledge, easily holding himself aloft to look through the filthy glass.
Bodie's eyes flicked up briefly from the magazine he was reading. "Just relax, Ray. Nothing we can do but wait for the cavalry."
"But how long are they gonna be?" demanded Doyle dropping back to the ground and turning to where Bodie sat perched on top of an old crate. "You could give me a leg up and I'll smash that glass," he thumbed over his shoulder.
"And what about the solid steel bars fixed across the outside?" asked Bodie without looking up.
"I can shout, someone might hear." Even to his own ears he didn't sound convinced.
"Forget it." Bodie glanced at his watch and then looked at his partner. "No-one's about, they'll all be down the pub."
"Oh this is terrific! It's been over an hour already, Bodie, how much bloody longer!"
"Look, Murphy knows we're here. Luckily one of us followed SOPs and let him know—“
"You just happened to mention it, you mean!"
"—where we were going. He’ll soon realise we should’ve been back by now and tell Cowley. We just have to wait. Could be worse, at least there’s something to read," he waved the magazine he was holding.
"Oh yeah, great, a Reader’s Digest from 1975 and Woman's Own." Doyle started pacing. "It's all Cowley's fault, making us work on Christmas Eve. We could be trapped down here for days, no food or water..."
"Never mind all that Doyle, you should be more concerned about how we explain it to the Cow. We'll never hear the end of it you know, getting caught out like bloody amateurs."
"Yeah, that's a point... if we get out, Cowley will kill us anyway," Doyle looked dejected. Leaning back against the wall, he slid down to the floor.
"Still, Dum spiro spero," said Bodie, flicking a page over.
"Dumb what?"
"Dum spiro spero," Bodie enunciated carefully as though to a child. "It's Latin, Doyle, means 'While I breathe, I hope'."
"Latin?" scoffed Doyle. "Don't tell me you did Latin at school. You were barely there long enough to learn English!"
"Nah," grinned Bodie. "It was a bloke in Africa, had it tattooed up his arm. The School of Life, you see, you can't beat it."
“Yeah? So how does that help us get out then, Houdini?”
“Just saying there’s always hope, that’s all.”
“Oh, I see. Well that’s brilliant, that is, really helpful.” Doyle stood up and started pacing again.
Bodie closed the copy of Woman’s Own and chucked it down on the floor. “Well," his gaze raked over the denim-clad figure strutting back and forth in front of him, "we could always… you know…?” He raised his eyebrows hopefully.
Doyle stopped in front of Bodie and stared at him in disbelief. “What, here? Are you completely mad, Bodie? With Cowley due to burst in at any moment? "
“It’d pass the time, wouldn’t it? And the Cow’s gonna be mad at us anyway, so….”
“Christ, you must have a death wish! Doesn't anything dampen that bloody libido of yours?" he started pacing restlessly again, hands on hips. "Try the RT again.”
Feeling his patience rapidly running out, Bodie kept a rein on his temper and obediently pulled the RT out of his jacket pocket. He pressed the button a few times. “No chance, we’re not going to get through, not down here.”
Just then they heard footsteps. Bodie stood up and positioned himself next to Doyle. Shoulder to shoulder, they both warily faced the door. They heard the jangle of keys in the lock and briefly exchanged glances, then the door swung open and there stood Murphy, grinning broadly.
“Thank God it’s you Murph,” said Bodie, releasing the breath he hadn’t realised he’d been holding. “Nice one mate, we owe you one,” he patted him on the shoulder.
Their relief was short-lived however, when another figure emerged from the shadows behind Murphy.
“So gentlemen,” Cowley greeted them, taking the keys from Murphy. “CI5’s finest caught out by a self-locking door. In CI5's own building, no less. You’ve surpassed yourselves,” he said with an air of amusement and a glint in his eye. He took a few paces around the room, taking in the dirt and cobwebs, before turning his gaze back on them. “And just what did you hope to find down here? You didn’t believe the rumours about crates of whisky, did you?” Neither Bodie nor Doyle replied. “I think a refresher with Macklin might be in order, don’t you?” Cowley smiled. “Something to look forward to in the New Year. In the meantime, you can both buy me a drink.” With that he turned abruptly and walked out of the cellar, a sniggering Murphy following him.
Bodie made a lurch for the door, just catching it before it swung shut again. Holding it firmly open he turned back to Doyle. “Well, the old man wasn’t too bad, was he, I think we got off lightly.”
Doyle took a few paces nearer and glared at him, “You think having to endure Macklin is getting off lightly?”
“At least it’s not till next week, Ray, I was half expecting him to make it tomorrow.”
“Yeah, well next time you have a hare-brained scheme to get us some free booze, count me out! I could do without spending several hours in a filthy, bloody cellar with nothing to do except listen to you!” Doyle emphasised his point by prodding a finger sharply in Bodie’s chest. “And now we’ve got that bloody sadist and his little helper to look forward to! Thanks a lot Bodie!” And with that, Doyle marched out of the door.
Bodie stared in amazement at the retreating figure. “And a Merry Christmas to you, mate,” he called before following, then let his eye line drop slightly to admire the undulating vision ahead of him.
Perhaps a few drinks with Cowley and the lads wasn’t such a bad idea, he decided. A bit of festive cheer should loosen Doyle up nicely, and then it would only take a few provocative glances and a couple of surreptitious touches, and Bodie was confident Doyle’s libido would be more than a match for his own...
The End

Title: Trapped
Author: Angelci5
Slash or Gen: Slash
Disclaimer: Not mine
Massive thanks to
Trapped
by Angelci5
"How much longer?" Doyle strutted across the cellar floor to where there was a small dirty window just above his head. He jumped up and grabbed the brick ledge, easily holding himself aloft to look through the filthy glass.
Bodie's eyes flicked up briefly from the magazine he was reading. "Just relax, Ray. Nothing we can do but wait for the cavalry."
"But how long are they gonna be?" demanded Doyle dropping back to the ground and turning to where Bodie sat perched on top of an old crate. "You could give me a leg up and I'll smash that glass," he thumbed over his shoulder.
"And what about the solid steel bars fixed across the outside?" asked Bodie without looking up.
"I can shout, someone might hear." Even to his own ears he didn't sound convinced.
"Forget it." Bodie glanced at his watch and then looked at his partner. "No-one's about, they'll all be down the pub."
"Oh this is terrific! It's been over an hour already, Bodie, how much bloody longer!"
"Look, Murphy knows we're here. Luckily one of us followed SOPs and let him know—“
"You just happened to mention it, you mean!"
"—where we were going. He’ll soon realise we should’ve been back by now and tell Cowley. We just have to wait. Could be worse, at least there’s something to read," he waved the magazine he was holding.
"Oh yeah, great, a Reader’s Digest from 1975 and Woman's Own." Doyle started pacing. "It's all Cowley's fault, making us work on Christmas Eve. We could be trapped down here for days, no food or water..."
"Never mind all that Doyle, you should be more concerned about how we explain it to the Cow. We'll never hear the end of it you know, getting caught out like bloody amateurs."
"Yeah, that's a point... if we get out, Cowley will kill us anyway," Doyle looked dejected. Leaning back against the wall, he slid down to the floor.
"Still, Dum spiro spero," said Bodie, flicking a page over.
"Dumb what?"
"Dum spiro spero," Bodie enunciated carefully as though to a child. "It's Latin, Doyle, means 'While I breathe, I hope'."
"Latin?" scoffed Doyle. "Don't tell me you did Latin at school. You were barely there long enough to learn English!"
"Nah," grinned Bodie. "It was a bloke in Africa, had it tattooed up his arm. The School of Life, you see, you can't beat it."
“Yeah? So how does that help us get out then, Houdini?”
“Just saying there’s always hope, that’s all.”
“Oh, I see. Well that’s brilliant, that is, really helpful.” Doyle stood up and started pacing again.
Bodie closed the copy of Woman’s Own and chucked it down on the floor. “Well," his gaze raked over the denim-clad figure strutting back and forth in front of him, "we could always… you know…?” He raised his eyebrows hopefully.
Doyle stopped in front of Bodie and stared at him in disbelief. “What, here? Are you completely mad, Bodie? With Cowley due to burst in at any moment? "
“It’d pass the time, wouldn’t it? And the Cow’s gonna be mad at us anyway, so….”
“Christ, you must have a death wish! Doesn't anything dampen that bloody libido of yours?" he started pacing restlessly again, hands on hips. "Try the RT again.”
Feeling his patience rapidly running out, Bodie kept a rein on his temper and obediently pulled the RT out of his jacket pocket. He pressed the button a few times. “No chance, we’re not going to get through, not down here.”
Just then they heard footsteps. Bodie stood up and positioned himself next to Doyle. Shoulder to shoulder, they both warily faced the door. They heard the jangle of keys in the lock and briefly exchanged glances, then the door swung open and there stood Murphy, grinning broadly.
“Thank God it’s you Murph,” said Bodie, releasing the breath he hadn’t realised he’d been holding. “Nice one mate, we owe you one,” he patted him on the shoulder.
Their relief was short-lived however, when another figure emerged from the shadows behind Murphy.
“So gentlemen,” Cowley greeted them, taking the keys from Murphy. “CI5’s finest caught out by a self-locking door. In CI5's own building, no less. You’ve surpassed yourselves,” he said with an air of amusement and a glint in his eye. He took a few paces around the room, taking in the dirt and cobwebs, before turning his gaze back on them. “And just what did you hope to find down here? You didn’t believe the rumours about crates of whisky, did you?” Neither Bodie nor Doyle replied. “I think a refresher with Macklin might be in order, don’t you?” Cowley smiled. “Something to look forward to in the New Year. In the meantime, you can both buy me a drink.” With that he turned abruptly and walked out of the cellar, a sniggering Murphy following him.
Bodie made a lurch for the door, just catching it before it swung shut again. Holding it firmly open he turned back to Doyle. “Well, the old man wasn’t too bad, was he, I think we got off lightly.”
Doyle took a few paces nearer and glared at him, “You think having to endure Macklin is getting off lightly?”
“At least it’s not till next week, Ray, I was half expecting him to make it tomorrow.”
“Yeah, well next time you have a hare-brained scheme to get us some free booze, count me out! I could do without spending several hours in a filthy, bloody cellar with nothing to do except listen to you!” Doyle emphasised his point by prodding a finger sharply in Bodie’s chest. “And now we’ve got that bloody sadist and his little helper to look forward to! Thanks a lot Bodie!” And with that, Doyle marched out of the door.
Bodie stared in amazement at the retreating figure. “And a Merry Christmas to you, mate,” he called before following, then let his eye line drop slightly to admire the undulating vision ahead of him.
Perhaps a few drinks with Cowley and the lads wasn’t such a bad idea, he decided. A bit of festive cheer should loosen Doyle up nicely, and then it would only take a few provocative glances and a couple of surreptitious touches, and Bodie was confident Doyle’s libido would be more than a match for his own...
The End

Title: Trapped
Author: Angelci5
Slash or Gen: Slash
Disclaimer: Not mine
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Date: 2008-12-14 11:45 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-12-14 11:59 am (UTC)Except that this one is lovely, brief offering or no! *g* I do like a good lads-trapped-together fic, and your ending makes me giggle - love the promise of it too, Bodie knowing just how to get his way... Cheers! *g*
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-14 12:41 pm (UTC)CI5’s finest caught out by a self-locking door. In CI5's own building, no less.
That made me laugh out loud - what a marvellous scene!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:28 pm (UTC)Thanks again!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:31 pm (UTC)Thank you so much, I’m really glad you liked the Latin bit too, funnily enough that was my starting point and I wrote the rest around it.
Thanks again!
BTW, love your icon!
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Date: 2008-12-14 01:39 pm (UTC)Oh, I loved that line! That is *so* Doyle and a Doyle who knows his Bodie. In fact I loved the whole piece, especially the unexpected twist towards the end.
Thanks for doing and sharing!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:34 pm (UTC)Oh thank you for that, that’s great to hear! And I’m really pleased you liked it, thank you so much!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:35 pm (UTC)Hee, I agree! I think they should have been stuck in there a bit longer tbh, at least overnight! *eg*
Thanks so much, really glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 2008-12-14 03:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-15 07:36 pm (UTC)and I'm sure Bodie's prediction is absolutely right. *g*
Oh definitely!
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Date: 2008-12-14 03:39 pm (UTC)Lovely fic, I really enjoyed it. Thank you!
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Date: 2008-12-14 03:47 pm (UTC)Thank you - a cheerful way to start my day!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:44 pm (UTC)Hee, very true! And that was their downfall!*g*
Thanks so much!
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Date: 2008-12-14 05:09 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-15 07:45 pm (UTC)I think you’re right! *g* They could have been stuck there at least overnight, and as you say, the possibilities...!
Thank you so much!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:48 pm (UTC)Only for the purposes of the plot! *g* I’m afraid I did rather take liberties with the lads’ intelligence for this one, purely for attempts at comedy and only cos it’s Christmas! *g*
Thanks so much!
BTW it was so lovely to meet you last week, albeit very briefly!
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Date: 2008-12-14 06:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-15 07:49 pm (UTC)Hee, I couldn’t resist that, and yes I’m quite sure Bodie’s prediction was correct! *g*
Thank you!
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Date: 2008-12-14 06:24 pm (UTC)Very amusing little story -- thanks so much for sharing it! :)
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:50 pm (UTC)And I loved -- loved! -- that Bodie knew that Latin phrase!
Oh I am glad! I love that Bodie *does* know things you might not expect him to, like the poetry etc… so I thought a bit of Latin was feasible too!
I’m so glad it amused you, thanks very much!
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Date: 2008-12-14 06:42 pm (UTC)I love so much that Bodie's reading Woman's Own *vbg*
Thanks for this festive treat!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:51 pm (UTC)I love so much that Bodie's reading Woman's Own *vbg*
Hee! It had to be, didn’t it, I couldn’t’ resist!
Thanks so much for commenting!
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Date: 2008-12-14 09:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-15 07:52 pm (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:55 pm (UTC)Thanks very much!
And it was lovely to meet you last week, btw, sorry we didn’t get a chance to chat!
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Date: 2008-12-15 05:29 am (UTC)Well, that was fun. I was delighted to find out that Bodie was reading Woman's Own after assuming that it would be the Reader's Digest... Perhaps he was checking out the "ways to attract your man" column. Ahem...
Thanks! :D
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:58 pm (UTC)Hehe, I’m glad you liked that... I thought Bodie would definitely opt for the Woman’s Own over Reader’s Digest... mind you, I’ve never actually read a RD, I’m just assuming! *g*
Thanks very much! :-D
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Date: 2008-12-15 08:01 pm (UTC)I'm really pleased you enjoyed the twist and it wasn't too obvious!
Thanks again!
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Date: 2008-12-16 01:10 am (UTC)Frances
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Date: 2008-12-18 06:52 pm (UTC)Hee, I was very tempted to make it a Cosmo, but thought it ought to be something a little more generic... thanks so much for commenting, and Very Happy Holidays to you too! :-D
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