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Hello. So first off I must apologise, because the fic I originally wrote for this Challenge, I decided to scrap yesterday. As a result, I'm afraid I have this rather brief offering instead.
Massive thanks to [livejournal.com profile] byslantedlight for the beta, any mistakes are down to me.


Trapped
by Angelci5

"How much longer?" Doyle strutted across the cellar floor to where there was a small dirty window just above his head. He jumped up and grabbed the brick ledge, easily holding himself aloft to look through the filthy glass.

Bodie's eyes flicked up briefly from the magazine he was reading. "Just relax, Ray. Nothing we can do but wait for the cavalry."

"But how long are they gonna be?" demanded Doyle dropping back to the ground and turning to where Bodie sat perched on top of an old crate. "You could give me a leg up and I'll smash that glass," he thumbed over his shoulder.

"And what about the solid steel bars fixed across the outside?" asked Bodie without looking up.

"I can shout, someone might hear." Even to his own ears he didn't sound convinced.

"Forget it." Bodie glanced at his watch and then looked at his partner. "No-one's about, they'll all be down the pub."

"Oh this is terrific! It's been over an hour already, Bodie, how much bloody longer!"

"Look, Murphy knows we're here. Luckily one of us followed SOPs and let him know—“

"You just happened to mention it, you mean!"

"—where we were going. He’ll soon realise we should’ve been back by now and tell Cowley. We just have to wait. Could be worse, at least there’s something to read," he waved the magazine he was holding.

"Oh yeah, great, a Reader’s Digest from 1975 and Woman's Own." Doyle started pacing. "It's all Cowley's fault, making us work on Christmas Eve. We could be trapped down here for days, no food or water..."

"Never mind all that Doyle, you should be more concerned about how we explain it to the Cow. We'll never hear the end of it you know, getting caught out like bloody amateurs."

"Yeah, that's a point... if we get out, Cowley will kill us anyway," Doyle looked dejected. Leaning back against the wall, he slid down to the floor.

"Still, Dum spiro spero," said Bodie, flicking a page over.

"Dumb what?"

"Dum spiro spero," Bodie enunciated carefully as though to a child. "It's Latin, Doyle, means 'While I breathe, I hope'."

"Latin?" scoffed Doyle. "Don't tell me you did Latin at school. You were barely there long enough to learn English!"

"Nah," grinned Bodie. "It was a bloke in Africa, had it tattooed up his arm. The School of Life, you see, you can't beat it."

“Yeah? So how does that help us get out then, Houdini?”

“Just saying there’s always hope, that’s all.”

“Oh, I see. Well that’s brilliant, that is, really helpful.” Doyle stood up and started pacing again.

Bodie closed the copy of Woman’s Own and chucked it down on the floor. “Well," his gaze raked over the denim-clad figure strutting back and forth in front of him, "we could always… you know…?” He raised his eyebrows hopefully.

Doyle stopped in front of Bodie and stared at him in disbelief. “What, here? Are you completely mad, Bodie? With Cowley due to burst in at any moment? "

“It’d pass the time, wouldn’t it? And the Cow’s gonna be mad at us anyway, so….”

“Christ, you must have a death wish! Doesn't anything dampen that bloody libido of yours?" he started pacing restlessly again, hands on hips. "Try the RT again.”

Feeling his patience rapidly running out, Bodie kept a rein on his temper and obediently pulled the RT out of his jacket pocket. He pressed the button a few times. “No chance, we’re not going to get through, not down here.”

Just then they heard footsteps. Bodie stood up and positioned himself next to Doyle. Shoulder to shoulder, they both warily faced the door. They heard the jangle of keys in the lock and briefly exchanged glances, then the door swung open and there stood Murphy, grinning broadly.

“Thank God it’s you Murph,” said Bodie, releasing the breath he hadn’t realised he’d been holding. “Nice one mate, we owe you one,” he patted him on the shoulder.

Their relief was short-lived however, when another figure emerged from the shadows behind Murphy.

“So gentlemen,” Cowley greeted them, taking the keys from Murphy. “CI5’s finest caught out by a self-locking door. In CI5's own building, no less. You’ve surpassed yourselves,” he said with an air of amusement and a glint in his eye. He took a few paces around the room, taking in the dirt and cobwebs, before turning his gaze back on them. “And just what did you hope to find down here? You didn’t believe the rumours about crates of whisky, did you?” Neither Bodie nor Doyle replied. “I think a refresher with Macklin might be in order, don’t you?” Cowley smiled. “Something to look forward to in the New Year. In the meantime, you can both buy me a drink.” With that he turned abruptly and walked out of the cellar, a sniggering Murphy following him.

Bodie made a lurch for the door, just catching it before it swung shut again. Holding it firmly open he turned back to Doyle. “Well, the old man wasn’t too bad, was he, I think we got off lightly.”

Doyle took a few paces nearer and glared at him, “You think having to endure Macklin is getting off lightly?”

“At least it’s not till next week, Ray, I was half expecting him to make it tomorrow.”

“Yeah, well next time you have a hare-brained scheme to get us some free booze, count me out! I could do without spending several hours in a filthy, bloody cellar with nothing to do except listen to you!” Doyle emphasised his point by prodding a finger sharply in Bodie’s chest. “And now we’ve got that bloody sadist and his little helper to look forward to! Thanks a lot Bodie!” And with that, Doyle marched out of the door.

Bodie stared in amazement at the retreating figure. “And a Merry Christmas to you, mate,” he called before following, then let his eye line drop slightly to admire the undulating vision ahead of him.

Perhaps a few drinks with Cowley and the lads wasn’t such a bad idea, he decided. A bit of festive cheer should loosen Doyle up nicely, and then it would only take a few provocative glances and a couple of surreptitious touches, and Bodie was confident Doyle’s libido would be more than a match for his own...

The End




Title: Trapped
Author: Angelci5
Slash or Gen: Slash
Disclaimer: Not mine
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Date: 2008-12-14 11:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] probodie.livejournal.com
ROFL! My, I wasnt expecting that! Lovely story, really enjoyed it. Good job they didnt start anything, either, with Murph about to burst in! Thanks for sharing it.

Date: 2008-12-14 11:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
You did decide? Awww...

Except that this one is lovely, brief offering or no! *g* I do like a good lads-trapped-together fic, and your ending makes me giggle - love the promise of it too, Bodie knowing just how to get his way... Cheers! *g*

Date: 2008-12-14 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greengerbil.livejournal.com
Hah! this made me giggle. Especially after the opening which suggests *serious* trouble, to find that they're locked in CI5's own cellar... Hee! Really great, and so funny! I can just see the expression on Cowley's face... thanks, angel - loved it. Especially the subtlety. I didn't see that punchline coming!
CI5’s finest caught out by a self-locking door. In CI5's own building, no less.
That made me laugh out loud - what a marvellous scene!

Date: 2008-12-14 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
Oh my gawd that's brilliant ... the lads in a pickle! I love matter-of-fact Latin-quoting Bodie reading Woman's Own, and grumpy grouchy pacing Doyle ... who after a few provocative glances and a couple of surreptitious touches will undoubtedly come undone *g* Very nice, thank you!

Date: 2008-12-14 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] andreathelion.livejournal.com
Very unexpected turn, clever you :) That was just brilliant, thank you!

Date: 2008-12-14 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
"Latin?" scoffed Doyle. "Don't tell me you did Latin at school. You were barely there long enough to learn English!"

Oh, I loved that line! That is *so* Doyle and a Doyle who knows his Bodie. In fact I loved the whole piece, especially the unexpected twist towards the end.

Thanks for doing and sharing!

Date: 2008-12-14 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
*SNORT* Locking themselves up in the cellar of CI5 HQ - brilliant. Of course something like this can only happen to our lads. I just wish Doyle had replied differently to Bodie's suggestion *EG* That really was great - left one hanging in the air for quite a while, guessing what happened.

Date: 2008-12-14 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
Oh no! CI5's own cellar? Heh. Very nice misdirection there, mate. Thank you! This was fun--and I'm sure Bodie's prediction is absolutely right. *g*

Date: 2008-12-14 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] londonronnie.livejournal.com
Ooh, I wasn't expecting that twist at the end!

Lovely fic, I really enjoyed it. Thank you!

Date: 2008-12-14 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistry89.livejournal.com
Self-locking doors should never be under-estimated and some-number-or-other accidents occur in the home (or at least somewhere considered safe) .... *g*
Thank you - a cheerful way to start my day!

Date: 2008-12-14 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biani.livejournal.com
If it were for me you could have kept them a lot longer in that cellar ;). Imagine all those possibilities :-). Thank you, that was a wonderful treat for the 3rd advent.

Date: 2008-12-14 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] come-in45.livejournal.com
Murphy to the rescue! And did Bodie really believe that one about the crates of whisky? So lovely and clearly written, I could picture the scene so well.

Date: 2008-12-14 06:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] smirra.livejournal.com
So Bodie looking for the Whisky crates eh? But he's all relaxed with an issue of moman's own in his lap, so him. And with Doyle pacing like that the evening will go as Bodie's predicting! Thank you!

Date: 2008-12-14 06:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lysimache.livejournal.com
Oh, that *was* funny! I could totally see the entire thing happening to them. And I loved -- loved! -- that Bodie knew that Latin phrase! [heart]

Very amusing little story -- thanks so much for sharing it! :)

Date: 2008-12-14 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] norfolkdumpling.livejournal.com
Those lads will do anything for a drink won't they?! I like this a lot. I'm a sucker for 'trapped together' scenes anyway, and this was funny and snarky to boot. *g*

I love so much that Bodie's reading Woman's Own *vbg*

Thanks for this festive treat!

Date: 2008-12-14 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
I never saw that coming! Good job. I like that Murphy opened the door and there was Cowley! And Bodie's lecherous thoughts. He's going to get what he wants eventually. Thanks!

Date: 2008-12-15 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erushi.livejournal.com
Oh, this was brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Locked in the CI5 basement, in search for mythical whisky - hee! Still giggling over this. Cheers!

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Date: 2008-12-15 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draycevixen.livejournal.com

Well, that was fun. I was delighted to find out that Bodie was reading Woman's Own after assuming that it would be the Reader's Digest... Perhaps he was checking out the "ways to attract your man" column. Ahem...

Thanks! :D

Date: 2008-12-15 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Hee, that was nice - I love way you set that up, as if it was a dastardly peril - the twist at the end was a delight. Thank you!

Date: 2008-12-15 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myrebelcat.livejournal.com
So cute! Thanks for the grin. :-)

Date: 2008-12-16 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com
Is this ok to take for Proslib? I couldn't spot any archive note.

Frances
Proslib business: proslib at gmail dot com
http://www.livejournal.com/users/hagsrus/

Date: 2008-12-16 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saintvic.livejournal.com
Ooopppsss thought I had already commented on this. Anyway just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this, very funny and some great moments.

Date: 2008-12-18 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asymphototropic.livejournal.com
Ha! Totally love the notion that Bodie would unabashedly choose to read Woman's Own. Likely it was all those recipes and pictures of food. And Doyle doing a bit of the attention-deficit thing, bored with imprisonment. A fun piece of fiction, this. Happy holidays to you, and thanks for the light-hearted piece.

Date: 2008-12-18 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magenta-blue.livejournal.com
Oh this was great! You've got a lovely touch with your writing - little details like the latin Bodie learnt from a bloke's tattoo, and Bodie patient and Doyle pacing! Love that they were locked in CI5's own cellar - brilliant! Thank you!

Date: 2008-12-18 11:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] krisserci5.livejournal.com
That was fun, wasn't expecting the CI5 basement!
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