That was perfect for a cold Monday night (no snow here to delay the start of term, sadly, but our little river is trying hard to freeze over).
The narrative being disjointed was clever, and then the disjointedness carried on in the last scene, where important and profound declarations, thoughts and decisions keep being interrupted by noisy truck drivers! Plus I've thought for a while that a transport caff is a very Bodie and Doyle environment. Hopefully they'll find themselves having a hearty breakfast in a good one sometime.
Heee! I always think of Bodie meeting thingie in the motorway services in Fall Girl when I think of them and transport cafs! Not quite the same thing though... *g* It's a fab story, isn't it!
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Date: 2009-01-05 09:59 pm (UTC)The narrative being disjointed was clever, and then the disjointedness carried on in the last scene, where important and profound declarations, thoughts and decisions keep being interrupted by noisy truck drivers! Plus I've thought for a while that a transport caff is a very Bodie and Doyle environment. Hopefully they'll find themselves having a hearty breakfast in a good one sometime.
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Date: 2009-01-06 10:14 am (UTC)