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*looks cautiously around* I know I didn't make it in here by closing time but the place still looks open for business so...

There was rather a lot of wine fueled making merry last night. When I *finally* got up this morning I found this in my WIP progress folder much to my surprise. Now edited to reflect something approaching the English language and posted here.


Love and Other Misunderstandings

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Date: 2009-02-15 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
Yay, the promised smut with pissed-off Doyle, cuffs and chains *does little happy dance* How could Bodie ever think... ok, Murphy is quite a nice and cute guy so I might forgive him that. But even thinking for a second it could have been Anson... bleargh. Anyway, it was some real nice hot smut including some of my major kinks so thank you! *SMOOCH*

Now back to Mexico to witness a bloody (and yet funny) revenge.

Date: 2009-02-15 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magenta-blue.livejournal.com
Sounds like wine fueled making merry should happen more often if this is the result! I chuckled a lot at:

I can hardly threaten to hit you from this position. I could threaten to bite you,

and

“I’m sorry Anson that it never crossed my mind that Murph would describe you as a great lover. Remind me to do that, Anson’ll have a bloody heart attack.”

*g* Thank you!

Date: 2009-02-15 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mab-browne.livejournal.com
It's difficult to remember when you're madly in love that the whole world isn't madly in love with the same person. *g* I think that Doyle is going to get a certain amount of needling mileage out of this occasion.

Date: 2009-02-15 07:26 pm (UTC)
ext_9136: (Doyle-Bodie)
From: [identity profile] birggitt.livejournal.com
*bewg* Why is that, I always enjoy more misunderstanding stories than anything else?
And go you, Doyle! Bloody awesome speech that last one!
Hot and funny and perfectly them. As always, petal :)
Thanks!!!

Date: 2009-02-15 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
You know me and bondage! So this was a good one for me. Dumb Bodie. As if Doyle would chose Murphy over him! LOL! Good story with the misunderstandings, the bit of sex (with clothes! another kink...) and that inconvenient rescue. Thanks!

Date: 2009-02-15 10:31 pm (UTC)
ext_9226: (pros1 - snailbones)
From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


Wheee! Pissy Doyle chained to Bodie's lap - you cunning evil wonderful woman you!

I wasn’t cut out for the priesthood, thought I might be in danger of throwing you to the floor and fucking you the moment I saw you again and all I got from you were withering eyebrows and the silent treatment.

That had me snorting with pleasure ::so ladylike *g*:: The whole thing is delish luv, thanks.



Date: 2009-02-15 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] norfolkdumpling.livejournal.com
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!

Lovely lovely lovely. Did I mention lovely? Mmmmmm....chained lads. Mmmmm....rubby lads. Mmmm....pissy Doyle and brooding Bodie.

I wasn’t cut out for the priesthood O RLY Doyle? *looks shifty*

I loved Bodie's withering eyebrows too.

Very happy over here Petal...thanks!

Date: 2009-02-16 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] probodie.livejournal.com
Havent had chance to read many VD fics (how wrong does that sentence look?? lol), but I did manage yours and I was so glad I did. How Bodie could think that Doyle could sleep with Murph beats me (even tho I do like Murph)...but how on earth you could think Murph would sleep with Anson is even funnier!!! LOL

Naturally I loved it.

Date: 2009-02-16 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
I like the "If you tell me that again later..." speech. Heh. And that Bodie can't really think anyone would sleep with anyone else but Doyle, if Doyle happened to be in the vicinity. *g* Thank you for the lovely Valentine's Day present!

Date: 2009-02-16 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilda-elise.livejournal.com
They are both too cute for words in this! And, omg, that it turned out to be Anson!

Very well done!

Date: 2009-02-16 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erushi.livejournal.com
Why you sneaky thing. Anson! And here I was thinking... *g*

Your fic has reduced me to incoherency, I fear. Jealous Bodie! Pissy Doyle!. Cuffs! That comment about priesthood! Withering brows! I been have reduced to such depths of incoherency, I am now abusing my exclamation marks. This fic deserves a re-read, and I definitely will be doing so once I post this comment.

Thanks for this! ♥
Edited Date: 2009-02-16 02:00 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-16 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bistokids.livejournal.com
Oh YAY! And you say there's another angry!Doyle and handcuffed!Bodie story on the way? *jiggles excitedly like a trussed-up Doyle*

This hit the spot just marvellous, thank you. and this bit -

“’Cos if you keep that up—”

Doyle sniggered.

“—I’m going to come in my trousers like some raw thirteen year old boy.”

“Good.”


I went straight from giggling like an eight-year-old to tongue hanging out at the hotness (I can't explain exactly what kink it is that you tapped into with that 'Good', but I can assure you it's there!)

Date: 2009-02-16 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biani.livejournal.com
Very nice! This is the second story with bondage/handcuffs I read for Valentine's Day and I can´t deny that I enjoy reading about a little rope play here and there. It´s not the first thing people might have in mind when they think of Valentine's Day, but in Pros fandom you´re spoiled for life! *g*

Thank you!

Date: 2009-02-16 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Fantastic set up here - I do love it when the lads misunderstand each other. And Doyle resolved things perfectly - clever lad:)))

Date: 2009-02-17 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
I'm still trying to get my head around the idea of Anson and Murphy.....hmmmm....well maybe but thank god it *wasn't* Murphy and Doyle! Thanks for this.

Date: 2009-02-19 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saintvic.livejournal.com
*hugs you*

That was just what I needed: misunderstandings, humour, great dialogue, bonus handcuffs, and wonderfully hot. Loved how you captured Bodie's voice for this and how you make it distinctive and obviously him. I like how you continually have Bodie moving from one misunderstanding to another, well until Doyle eventually manages to put him right.

Thanks luv.

Edited Date: 2009-02-19 11:46 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-20 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saintvic.livejournal.com
See I can kinda see them together:

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