WIP finished: The Perfect Couple
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My second and the last WIP is finally finished. Big thanks to
byslantedlight.
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It was so perfect! Bodie's glistening hole, stretched and ready just for him, hot tight heaven. He took his cock and guided it towards this paradise. As the head touched the entrance, Bodie clasped his muscles in anticipation, and they wetly caressed Ray's glans.
"Oh, fuck!" It was more than Ray could stand. Within a few moments his come flooded Bodie's arse, but unfortunately, only the outside.
Bodie groaned, not exactly sure whether he was more disappointed or amused. Probably both. It hadn't been the first time one of them came too early, but it was the first time in a situation like this.
Doyle finally regained his senses. He cursed again and then, "I'm sorry, I..."
"It's all right." Bodie turned from his stomach, took Ray into his arms and kissed him gently on his brow. "We can do it the other way, love. I can fuck you, if you want me to."
Doyle sighed, still shaken by his failure. "Okay. Sounds fair, considering." One more kiss and he let Bodie prepare him.
His partner was very gentle and considerate. Every touch, every caress, every kiss and every stroke helped Ray to relax and not to think about the accident. After several long, unhurried minutes he was ready and more than willing to welcome Bodie inside. It had to be any moment now--
"Oh, fuck!"
Startled by his tone, Doyle turned to see very disgruntled "I-can't-believe-it!" Bodie...
...and his very, very spent cock.
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Title: The Perfect Couple
Author: Diegina
Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Rating: adult
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:-)
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It was so perfect! Bodie's glistening hole, stretched and ready just for him, hot tight heaven. He took his cock and guided it towards this paradise. As the head touched the entrance, Bodie clasped his muscles in anticipation, and they wetly caressed Ray's glans.
"Oh, fuck!" It was more than Ray could stand. Within a few moments his come flooded Bodie's arse, but unfortunately, only the outside.
Bodie groaned, not exactly sure whether he was more disappointed or amused. Probably both. It hadn't been the first time one of them came too early, but it was the first time in a situation like this.
Doyle finally regained his senses. He cursed again and then, "I'm sorry, I..."
"It's all right." Bodie turned from his stomach, took Ray into his arms and kissed him gently on his brow. "We can do it the other way, love. I can fuck you, if you want me to."
Doyle sighed, still shaken by his failure. "Okay. Sounds fair, considering." One more kiss and he let Bodie prepare him.
His partner was very gentle and considerate. Every touch, every caress, every kiss and every stroke helped Ray to relax and not to think about the accident. After several long, unhurried minutes he was ready and more than willing to welcome Bodie inside. It had to be any moment now--
"Oh, fuck!"
Startled by his tone, Doyle turned to see very disgruntled "I-can't-believe-it!" Bodie...
...and his very, very spent cock.
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Title: The Perfect Couple
Author: Diegina
Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Rating: adult
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:-)
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Date: 2009-05-31 11:13 am (UTC)thanx for sharing! *hugs*