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Doyle picked idly at the rusty paint covering the railings along the pier as he gazed at the wet sand beneath him.   Down on the beach a fat, grey seagull picked at an empty ice cream wrapper, tossing it in the air and squawking angrily at the other gulls hovering greedily in the distance.  The stale smell of seaweed and salt filled the air, and he unconsciously wiped a hand under his nose in distaste.

 

English Riviera, my arse.

 

He turned his head towards the shoreline.  The tide was miles out, the sea no more than a thin unbroken line in the distance and he watched silently as a group of children gamely made their way towards the water with an inflatable dinghy carried above their heads, picking carefully through various bundles of seaweed deposited on the sand.  He glanced again at the murky brown-blue sea on the horizon.  It hardly seemed worth the walk. 

 

He looked down at his watch.  Ten o’clock.  Bodie would be here soon and then they could go home, beat the bank holiday traffic and leave bloody Torbay to the tourists. 

 

He turned his back on the children, wandering instead towards the amusements and slot machines that filled the length of the pier.  Still keeping an eye out for Bodie, he walked past a little blonde girl who was earnestly pouring coin after coin into a roll-a-penny game.  Doyle smiled in spite of himself.  Bodie loved this kind of thing.  He would have wasted so much time here on the amusements, playing on every single machine and gloating like a bastard every time he won anything.  He chuckled as the little girl hit the jackpot and immediately began shovelling her winnings right back into the same game.  There was no doubt, Bodie would absolutely love the pier’s tacky penny arcade with its ageing slot machines and the annoyingly cheerful music blaring out over the sound of crashing coins and shouting children.  Doyle shoved his hands in his pockets and turned away.  Well, he’d love it if they were actually allowed time to enjoy it.  If only they were here on holiday, and not on bloody duty.

 

Doyle turned and made his way towards the front of the pier.  He  looked at his watch one more time.  Five past ten.   Bodie should be there by now, with a bit of luck all packed up and ready to go.   He sidestepped the queue for Madame Incredible’s fortune telling booth and scanned the mass of people mulling about on the green by the entrance to the pier, looking out for Bodie amongst the crowd.  He zipped up his coat as the wind began to pick up around him, feeling a few spots of fine rain begin to splutter and spit in the air.  Absolutely Typical.  Two weeks in the glorious “English Riviera” and all he’d had was wind, rain and boredom.  Not that Bodie had fared much better.  At least Doyle only had to go through the motions of being a typical English tourist, stuck in a grotty B&B and taking in all the dubious delights that summer in Torbay had to offer, checking in with Bodie whenever they had the chance.  Bodie on the other hand had been in much deeper.  Doyle let out a long, slow breath.  Who’d have thought there were terrorists in Torbay, for Christ’s sake. 

 

Doyle picked his way slowly through the busy crowd, heading towards the dilapidated row of cafes lined up between the green and the sea wall.  Bodie might have come out a little worse for wear, but everything had been neatly tied up in the end, with the gang’s leaders safely handed over to Cowley and Bodie still in one piece and ready to head back to London. 

 

He sat down on the low sandstone wall outside a faded booth advertising fishing trips around the bay, looking at his watch one more time.  Quarter past ten now.  He sat still, watching the children enjoying donkey rides over the green and families playing cricket or rounders, resolutely ignoring the grey clouds looming above.  He didn’t move or turn his head when Bodie lowered himself down next to him, nudging him with his foot as he nodded towards a stall a few yards down the road.

 

“I don’t know about you mate, but I fancy an ice cream before we head off.”  Bodie rubbed his hands together appreciatively.  “Clotted cream vanilla with a flake stuck in the side and more clotted cream on top.  My favourite.” 

 

Doyle looked at the spots of rain that were beginning to darken the concrete pathway in front of them.  “It’s freezing.”

 

Bodie shrugged.  “It’s summer in England.  Ice cream on the beach, what more can you ask for?  It’s like being on holiday.”

 

Doyle looked across at the purple bruise slowly fading across Bodie’s jaw, the slight swelling on his lower lip that still hadn’t quite gone down.  He propped his hands on the wall behind him and leaned backwards.

 

“We’re gonna be late.  Don’t much fancy getting stuck in the bank holiday traffic going back on the M5.” 

 

Bodie didn’t answer, turning his head instead to watch a family pay at the entrance to the crazy golf further down the green, picking up their clubs and scorecards and five bright red golf balls.  Doyle followed his gaze. 

 

“We really should head off.”   

 

Bodie nodded in agreement, but didn’t make any move to heave himself off the low stone wall.  Doyle frowned to himself and let out an exasperated sigh.  The simple fact was that they weren’t on holiday, they were still on duty.  Always on bloody duty.  If they had been on holiday then they would have been able to put up deckchairs side by side on the beach, waste all their money on the penny arcade, eat ice cream until they were sick…

 

He looked at Bodie out of the corner of his eye.

 

…they would have been able to go out to the pub in the evening, stagger home after one pint too many of the local ale, head back to the B&B.  Share a room.  Be together.

 

Doyle kicked at a pebble with his toe.  This was no holiday.  “I just want to go home.”

 

Bodie nodded again, his eyes still fixed somewhere in the distance.  He leaned back slightly, hands braced behind him, his fingers brushing against Doyle’s and staying there, warm and firm against Doyle’s skin.  Doyle wrapped his little finger around Bodie’s, holding him there in place. 

 

He blinked against a shaft of sunlight that was making its way through the grey clouds, holding on to Bodie’s hand clasped behind them.  He gave a gentle squeeze and felt his own hand gripped firmly in return.  Doyle smiled, enjoying the sunlight on his face and Bodie’s presence beside him.

 

Just as if he was on holiday.




Title:  Not on holiday
Author:  Foxcat
Bodie/Doyle
I own nothing, and this is done entirely for fun.

Date: 2009-09-29 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Very nice. I loved the atmosphere here, I could really see Torbay stretched out in front of them. And that moment of miniature hand-holding was exquisite. Just little fingers, but so, so them.

Thank you, that was gorgeous. You'll have to go on Pros writing holidays more often..*g*

Date: 2009-09-29 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilda-elise.livejournal.com
I love the scene at the end, making do with what they can have and making it mean so much. Really lovely.

Date: 2009-09-29 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Love this! I can totally picture them in Torbay from this. And linking their little fingers is gorgeous.

Date: 2009-09-29 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
I am officially in love with this. The Doyle pov is delightful - his idea of what a holiday should be is ace ... If they had been on holiday then they would have been able to put up deckchairs side by side on the beach, waste all their money on the penny arcade, eat ice cream until they were sick… - excellent! And kind of melancholy. And I'm a sucker for pinkie love, and the gentle conversation and the colours and smells of Torbay. And hahahaha for Bodie's favourite ice-cream. So, all in all, I am officially in love with this. *g*

Date: 2009-09-29 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] andreathelion.livejournal.com
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, made me actually feel like I was there, too. And that sort of hand holding, just a perfect ending. Thank you!!

Date: 2009-09-29 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
You caught the atmosphere so well... Now I really think, I need a holiday!
Thanks for that short moment!

Date: 2009-09-29 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
I think gilda_elise just captured exactly what you made me feel with this fic - making do with what they can have and making it mean so much. Yes, the way they feel about the joys (!) of the English seaside and yes for the way they feel about duty ... and about the fact that they just can't openly express any of their feelings for each other. Making do, and knowing it means everything - just perfect.

Date: 2009-09-29 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
You gave me such a good scene with the water, the shore, the arcade, and Doyle, wishing he was on holiday. I liked how easily they came together, little fingers touching. It was such a delightful piece. Thank you.

Date: 2009-09-29 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
I thought this was a beautiful piece of writing - you got everything right and I loved it: the dreary yet lovable (to Brits!) seaside atmosphere; the way Doyle seemed detached from the rest of humanity as if life was passing him by and held no meaning for him without Bodie and the way he knew Bodie. And I loved the final scene with their fingers gently touching and then hands gripping and this taking place in the middle of hundreds of holidaymakers seemed to increase the intimacy and 'special-ness' of the moment. (I hope that's a word...). It's great finding new writing (or writing that's new to *me*) and I thought this was just perfect. Thank you.
Edited Date: 2009-09-29 09:12 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-09-29 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
Well, coming across good, new writing is such a great feeling that it's exciting, especially for me as I don't write but I really do appreciate all the effort that must goes into it. And I've got a real thing for atmosphere in stories and stories which can make me feel I'm *there* with Bodie and Doyle and I think your story achieved that.

Date: 2009-09-29 09:46 pm (UTC)
scherwood: (B&D: B/D Kiss)
From: [personal profile] scherwood
*happy sigh*
Love~ nothing better... *humming*
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

*in a weird mood today*

Date: 2009-09-30 08:40 am (UTC)
scherwood: (B&D:  Piece)
From: [personal profile] scherwood
it is, it is... *nod, nod*

Date: 2009-09-29 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com
If you'd like this archived at Proslib, would you send me a note, please?

I didn't see an archive header but always delighted to welcome a new writer.

Frances
Proslib business: proslib at gmail dot com
http://www.livejournal.com/users/hagsrus/

Date: 2009-09-29 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com
And sorry, of course we do have some of your work already!

Date: 2009-09-29 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siskiou.livejournal.com
I just came home from a stressful workday and felt just a little like Doyle, gloomy and wishing for a holiday. Even the weather fit, since our summer has suddenly packed up and we are having showers.
Your story was just thing to put a smile on my face.
Doyle really needs Bodie to not let him sink too deep into depression (or that's how it felt to me), and Bodie comes through. :)

Date: 2009-09-29 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] robeau.livejournal.com
This is such a nice piece of writing. I loved the picture you painted of the beach and the weather and the real tourists. And Doyle and Bodie on the wall, sharing a private moment in a very public place, was wonderfully done.

Date: 2009-09-30 01:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com
Really enjoyed this. Evocative descriptions and mood, and little things - like the bruise on Bodie's face, Doyle's understated concern, the linked fingers at the end - made a wonderful read. Thank you!

Date: 2009-09-30 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biani.livejournal.com
A very enjoyable read! Loved the last scene where the gesture with their fingers revealed more about them than words ever could. Thank you!

Date: 2009-09-30 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biani.livejournal.com
A very enjoyable read! Loved the last scene where the gesture with their fingers revealed more about them than words ever could. Thank you!

Date: 2009-09-30 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gritsinmisery.livejournal.com
I haven't been at the English seaside for 15 years, and you have quite made me miss it.

Here's hoping the lads get a real holiday very soon.

Date: 2009-09-30 05:10 pm (UTC)
ext_112784: (he's mine)
From: [identity profile] angel-ci5.livejournal.com
Oh this is lovely!
Really atmospheric and a little wistful too... And I adore those precious moments in the last couple of lines!
Thank you!

Date: 2009-09-30 07:20 pm (UTC)
ext_9226: (pros Don4)
From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


I really enjoyed the atmosphere - you caught Torquay on a dampy summer's day beautifully - and I love the gentle ending too. I just hope Bodie got his ice cream, bless him. *g*

Date: 2009-09-30 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saintvic.livejournal.com
I like how you have captured the feel of Torbay and the way being on duty permeates everything. And the warmth in the moment at the end is lovely.

Not on Holiday by Foxcat (G)

Date: 2012-10-02 01:42 pm (UTC)
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