One Night on Agard Street by Slantedlight

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

I didn't think I'd get this finished, and it's not what I imagined it was going to be, but... it is finished, so yeay. I've had to pdf it for the formatting I'm afraid, cos html won't let me indent, but... if you'd like to, here's a little something to huddle up with in bed tonight, wind and rain rattling your house, the clouds rushing past... *g*


One Night on Agard Street by Slantedlight



Title: One Night on Agard Street
Author: Slantedlight
Slash or Gen:Slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: If you'd like it
Disclaimer: Bodie, Doyle and the CI5 universe aren't mine, I just borrow them for the joy of it

Comments

[gilda-elise.livejournal.com]

Oh, no fair! I want to know what happens next.

What a spooky, little tale. Very well done!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Thank you! And hee - what happens next is all in your head... *g* I'm glad it worked though - I agonised for ages before realising that I just needed that halloween-ish ending! *g*

[roven75.livejournal.com]

Now that's what I call a Halloween story! :D
Loved your descriptions, and with them you've managed to create such a terrific atmosphere. The whole story seems charged with it, like the electricity laden air in the story itself. Very well done.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh I am glad you liked it - thank you! And yeay for atmosphere, that's just what I was going for! *g*

[cloudless-9193.livejournal.com]

Wow, I've just read it. I think it's brilliant!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Hee - thank you! I'm all halloween-pumpkin-smiley, now! *vbg*

[msmoat.livejournal.com]

You did get it done--yay! And a spooky story it is, too--very atmospheric and gripping. Thanks!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

I did it! Didn't think I was going to, was all ready to give it up, and then the ending just clicked, as it sometimes does. Phew! *g* Very glad you liked it too - thank you!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

That was good and creepy. I liked it. Thanks.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

You're welcome, I'm so glad it worked out to be creepy! *g*

[snailbones.livejournal.com]

Eep! I'm awfully glad I read that in daylight *g* Beautifully creepy and atmospheric, thank you!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Hee! I found a book about Derby's ghosts, and knew the lads would have to go back there - poor young Doyle couldn't possibly have escaped them... *g*

[hagsrus.livejournal.com]

Oh, very well done!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Well, thank you! *g*

[siskiou.livejournal.com]

EEeee!
I'm glad the sun is shining and it's not windy!
What a twist at the end!
Was thinking back to the ghost stories from Berry Pomeroy. :)

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Hee - bet you have alot of windy rainy weather, though... *g* Oooh, the Berry Pomeroy ghosts, yes! The lads could meet up with one of them perhaps, next year... *g*

[foreverfoxcat.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry to interrupt this conversation, but I had to interject with a squeeee - Berry Pomeroy Castle is my favourite place in the whole wide world. If you were to take the lads there in a fic and, er, scare the pants of them, that would be soooo cool! Do it do it do it.

[constant-muse.livejournal.com]

I've resisted reading all day until now!

Where is that ambulance...?! Very chilling indeed, thank you.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Hee! Stoopid ambulance... happy to have chilled you a bit... *g*

[foreverfoxcat.livejournal.com]

Oo-er, that fic actually genuinely scared me. In fact, I personally spent most of that fic standing very nervously in the corner, wanting to get the hell out of that building as soon as possible! So yeah, good job. :D Glad that book proved to be so inspiring. :D

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm so late to say thank you I'm so glad you were scared... *vbg* I mean, I'm glad you're tucked up cosily at home, but... *g* Yeay the book, and yeay!

[alicambs.livejournal.com]

Dead creepy, and the ending.... eep!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Heee - my plan vorked... *g* (even if I'm 3 months late writing back...)

[angel-ci5.livejournal.com]

Very chilling and atmospheric! And nicely interwoven with a glimpse of Doyle's childhood, thank you!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

I can't believe I didn't have the manners to reply to you 3 months ago - I'm sorry! Because thank you, I'm glad you found it atmospheric, and thank you so much for saying so! *g*