[identity profile] tango65.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
Agree, thank goodness for the extended deadline. Here's my contribution.....................

Bodie smirked as he looked at the sorry lot standing across the room from them. “You heard Major Nairn” he said, “its inter-agency cooperation.” Keller snorted in disgust and so he continued. “We learn to get along here and then the Met will do what we tell them to, when we meet them in the field.” The next snort he got from Keller was one of amusement and his smirk widened as he got the reaction he had sought.

They continued to look over the Met officers in attendance, who were giving similar scrutiny to the SAS officers in return.

Keller snorted again. “Are any of those nancies even going to survive this course? They look like a strong wind will blow them over.” “That's the point,” Bodie replied as he continued scanning the other men, “we're supposed to show them how its done and lend a helping hand..... in exchange for future favours of course.....” He stopped as someone caught his eye.

A man, of his height, but much slimmer with a curly head of hair and whose whipcord body held his eyes with a fascination he had not experienced in many years. Somehow the man sensed his observation and looked up with a scowl. As he noted the broken cheekbone, which did nothing to downplay his appeal, Bodie couldn't help but smirk widely, a response which was met with a deepening scowl on the other side, before the man looked to their commanding officers at the front, who were outlining the week's activities.

Bodie's fascination with the man, who he had discovered was Ray Doyle, of the Drugs Squad (yawn), continued throughout the five day course. Doyle was a scrappy fighter, but he knew how to use his speed and flexibility to advantage and managed to take down several of Bodie's SAS colleagues in the hand-to-hand fighting, much to their disgust, but to his growing amusement.

Much to his own disgust though, Doyle outdid him on every handgun challenge they faced (although he outdid him with the rifle), so he was looking forward to their listed pairing in the last day of the event – the survival course.

“Who did you bribe to make that happen?” Keller asked quietly when the pairings were announced. Bodie just smirked and tapped the side of his nose.

Light was not even dawning on the last day as they got their orders and headed out, two by two. A curt greeting was all he got from the grumpy cop, but that was the only bad thing about their acting partnership. Bodie delighted in how well they worked together – seeming to anticipate when and where help was needed (which wasn't often) and moving through the challenges smoothly and effectively, passing all but a few of the pairs that had started before them.

At the end of the course, they stood in the marshalling area, cooling down whilst regaining their breath. “You're good,” Bodie spurted out, much to his surprise, disarmed as he was by the cool gaze upon him. Doyle, to his surprise, blushed. “You're not so bad yourself,” he muttered in reluctant praise. Bodie grinned.

And then it was over. Their commanding officers gained their attention, proclaiming the event a success and each promising their full cooperation to each other when they next meet on the street. With a quick smile for each other, Bodie and Doyle headed back to their respective colleagues and back to their work. Fully expecting that they would never see each other again, they were each surprised to realise how disappointing that would be. Life, however, has a funny way of surprising you.......

Title: The right course
Author: tango65
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: Yes please

Date: 2011-06-20 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hutchynstarsk.livejournal.com
Very nice! :D

Date: 2011-06-21 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this look at how they first met. You did a good job showing the differences in their backgrounds but they managed to find good in each other. Nice.

Date: 2011-06-21 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey853.livejournal.com
Cool story. I can understand why someone like Bodie might underestimate someone who looked Doyle until he saw him in action. I enjoyed it, thanks.

Date: 2011-06-21 05:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piskiedust.livejournal.com
Thank you, this works nicely.

"they were each surprised to realise how disappointing that would be" I can imagine - what a happy surprise though...

Date: 2011-06-21 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Ah, very nice - and interesting to see Keller in on the training! I'm glad about the extended deadline too... *g*

(On a mod-ish thing - would you mind editing your "header" to the end of the story so that it's under the cut and a "trailer"? I know it doesn't spoil anything on this occasion, but people have a habit of copying what they think they've seen, and we really do try to keep everyone happy here by using "trailers" rather than "headers". Thank you! *g*)

Date: 2011-06-21 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
You should be able to just go in and edit your post, then just cut and paste the header to the end of your story. (It'll either say "edit" or there'll be a little pencil icon to click on)

If you could do it for this post that'd be great, as we've had people just copying others before now, and then I have to ask every single person who does it! Thanks!

Date: 2011-06-21 12:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Almost (*g*) - it needs to go under the cut, please - that's the whole point! People who want spoilers know where to go and find them, and people who don't want to be spoiled don't have to be! It's a way of keeping as many people happy as possible, because some people like spoilers and warnings etc, and some people don't... Thank you!

Date: 2011-06-21 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Perfect! Thank you - and sorry to keep asking, it's just that it's happened a couple of times that people in the next challenges have gone in and just copied someone else's post style without looking at the user info guidance - it's easier if I can just ask one person rather than half a dozen... *g*

And I know what you mean about cuts and things, it takes ages to figure them out. It's much easier in the html window actually, if you've not tried that yet...

Date: 2011-06-21 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornishcat.livejournal.com
Yeay, I can really see the lads in this story ... stubborn, competitive but instantly attracted. Oh, what fun they're going to have when next they meet. *g*

Date: 2011-06-21 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
Very nice. Bodie spurting...Doyle blushing (evil grin!) And life is full of surprises! I'm glad the deadline was extended - this was worth the wait!

Date: 2011-06-22 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liriel1810.livejournal.com
Lovely little piece! Nice to see how Bodie's attention was caught and never really wavered the whole time Doyle was around. I'm sure Doyle was equally mesmerized. It'd be very interesting to see their reactions when they meet up again!

The Right Course

Date: 2011-06-24 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
I'm late to the party, but I just wanted to say this was great fun! I love seeing one through the other's eyes, and this Bodie's-eye-view of a new and as yet unfamiliar Doyle was just great - it's the way he gradually admits that his expectations are being confounded at every turn, until eventually they actually admit it out loud ... very tantalising, knowing that they're going to be seeing a lot more of each other!

Thanks so much for posting (and yes indeed, thank goodness for that extended deadline! *g*)

Date: 2011-06-28 08:17 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
I'm new to all this but just wanted to say how much I enjoyed it - AND was very frustrated that it stopped! Are you planning to follow it up at all?

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