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Posting on behalf of [livejournal.com profile] murphybabe, who is all but internet-less right now - Pros fic! I'm warming the mince pies and pouring the gin mulled wine cup of tea gin all ready...

Home for Christmas
by Murphybabe


Doyle was cold and tired. Tired of hiding, tired of slinking through the back streets like the fugitive he was. And the streets had changed since he was a lad: Derby's civic pride in being granted city status had spawned a rash of new one-way systems and blocked-off streets.

He resented being sent up to Derby, chasing a will-o'-the-wisp because he knew the territory and could slip back into the local accent without much bother. He'd run from Derby down to London, all those years ago, and hadn't wanted to come back to relive his past. There were just enough changes to make a dislocation in his senses, pubs boarded up and streets not as they used to be. His shoulder blades itched: waiting to be spotted, he had one final piece of information to confirm from a grass and then he was out of here.

Light beckoned, shimmering through the sleet. There weren't many people out on the street, and those who were late leaving the office scurried, heads down, towards warm homes and loving families. What would it hurt, just to take a few minutes in the shelter? He looked around, wincing as a cold trickle of rain ran down the back of his neck. He ducked under a branch, hopped over the low wall and opened the big door quietly.

Warmth, light and sound hit him like a wall. Oh, but he remembered this. All medieval tracery on light stone from the outside, Derby cathedral was a baroque creation of space and light and golden highlights inside. And tonight, sound - baroque again, curlicues of sound rising through the heated air. He looked cautiously down the aisle. At the far end, a choir was drawn up in serried ranks, focused intently on the conductor. The orchestra was busy, heads down, creating beautiful patterns of music with a strength and rhythm that transcended the centuries, speaking to modern man, taking time from one century and gifting it to another. And the choir, totally focussed on the man at the front, jeans-clad and waving a little baton - all that power and beauty harnessed, leashed, controlled.

He recognised the music now. A classic Christmas pop, Handel's Messiah would bring the good citizens of Derby out to listen in self-satisfied comfort, smug in the knowledge that they were cultured because they knew that they had to stand for the Hallelujah Chorus - if not why.

Caught up in the beauty of the music, he took time out from the miserable job and just listened. He had the best stereo system he could afford, with Dolby sound and sub-woofers and tweeters, but nothing compared to hearing the music live, with human frailties transcended by the beauty of the music. The separate strands weaved over and through each other, echoing back and around and building to create a delicate tracery of sound. A hushed pause, and suddenly, trumpets and the full choir. He listened, weary past belief, and the music and the warmth and the light sent him into a trance-like state, borne up by the beauty around him. A sudden discordance, the tap-tap of the conductor's baton, and the choir and orchestra fell into siulence. Doyle couldn't hear what was said, but there was a rustle of laughter from the choir and a gathering, purposeful, as they launched into intricacy again.

He looked at them as he backed away to the door. Mostly middle-aged, dressed informally, fumbling for page-turns - their lives were so different to his, yet they were what he fought for, that they might come to choir practice in the cathedral and cluck like contented chickens as they gave each other lifts home to happy suburbia. They wouldn't even know he existed, he and the rest of Cowley's minions, until something went wrong and there was a stern twenty-second feature on the 9 o'clock news. And that was how it should be, he concluded.

If he could wrap this up, confirm the suspected terrorist cell, he could be back in time for Christmas. Maybe Bodie would be there, finished with whatever op they had him on , and maybe they could have Christmas Day off together. A cosy little fantasy flitted through his tired brain, of the two of them warm and comfortable on the settee, watching telly after turkey and Christmas pud.

He slipped silently out the door and shivered as the sleet hit again. Time to finish up this op and go home.

______


There was a prolonged buzz at the door: long, short. long, long. Bodie launched himself at the entry phone, knowing that code.

"Not today,thank you, I've got all the Tupperware I need."

The growl came through the tinny transmitter clearly. "Stop pissing about and let me up, Bodie."

Grinning, Bodie released the door and leaned against the wall, waiting.

It had obviously been a long few weeks, and his partner looked rough, strung out and moving with little of his usual grace. The overlong curls hung into shadowed eyes, and he had lost weight.

"All done, then?"

"Yeah, all wrapped up, seen the Old Man an' got time off for good behaviour. Well, two days, anyway."

"Just enough time to cook all this food I've got in, then."

"If I cook it, mate, and you eat it, you're washing up as well."

Bodie smirked. "How could you think otherwise, sunshine?"

Later, Bodie smiled faintly as Eric and Ernie skipped off into the distance. Bring me sunshine, indeed. Without glancing sideways, he shuffled slightly into the corner of the settee, allowing the head sagging against him to loll more comfortably against his shoulder. He slid an arm up and around, and Doyle sighed and curled into him. He felt the broad shoulders relax, and wrinked his nose to dislodge the tickling curls. Home for Christmas. He'd obviously been a good boy that year.

~End~


Title: Home for Christmas
Author: Murphybabe
Slash or Gen: Slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: Yes please
Disclaimer: I wish they were mine, but they’re not.

Date: 2011-12-19 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
Now that's a nice image to leave us with at the end! Cosy and comfortable together, just at it should be on Christmas day. *g* Thank you! I enjoyed Doyle's pause for a break, and the reminding of why he does what he does. But I especially like that he and Bodie both receive their Christmas wishes. *g*

Date: 2012-01-07 12:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Thank you for your lovely comment! I nearly didn't resolve it, leaving Doyle desperately wanting to get home for Christmas, but decided they deserved the break, so glad you liked the last image!

Date: 2011-12-19 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etain-antrim.livejournal.com
Nice! I enjoyed both halves. Doyle finding peace and purpose in the church choir and orchestra is *so* in character and it slaked a bit of my own seasonal panic just to be there with him. And then the contentment that he and Bodie create together is perfect!

Date: 2012-01-07 12:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Oh, I'm glad it worked for you! Glad also that you liked their contentment at the end - they must have been good lads after all. Sorry for the late response, though.

Date: 2011-12-19 07:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


That was lovely, thank you. I love the idea of Doyle taking shelter for a few minutes in the cathedral, and then again later, in Bodie.

Date: 2012-01-07 12:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Well, thank you! I'm sorry it took so long to respond.

Date: 2011-12-19 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
That was a very warm and cosy story in spite of poor Doyle being out in the cold for a bit. I like that they ended up together, both home for Christmas. Thanks.

Date: 2012-01-07 12:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Sorry I'm so late replying to your kind comment. Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2011-12-20 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
nothing compared to hearing the music live, with human frailties transcended by the beauty of the music. The separate strands weaved over and through each other, echoing back and around and building to create a delicate tracery of sound. A hushed pause, and suddenly, trumpets and the full choir. He listened, weary past belief, and the music and the warmth and the light sent him into a trance-like state, borne up by the beauty around him.

What a beautiful description! I love listening to the choir at Christmas time and you've captured it so well!

The story was everything a Christmas story should be - a bit of cold, a bit of self-reflection and finally, a warm Bodie! *g*

Well done! Thanks.

Date: 2012-01-07 12:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Thank you very much for your comments! Ha, well, the choir sounding good is what it should be, of course. The bit about the choir falling into disarray is unfortunately sometimes true as well!

I was going to leave him out in the cold, but Bodie called very insistently, wanting his Doyle back.

Date: 2011-12-20 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlightmead.livejournal.com
Oh, great!

I love the mixed feelings of returning to a place he had tried to leave behind him. The description of the choir practice and how the voices collapse into disarray as the conductor stops them is spot on. Poor Doyle - I really do get the feeling here that this is a world that he observes rather than partaking in.

And then to his real world. Which, obviously, has its attractions. Bodie-shaped.:)

And I like Bodie launching himself at the buzzer and then joking about. Can't sound too desperate, after all!

Date: 2012-01-07 12:40 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Hey, thanks! And yes, the choir's disarray is of course taken from my own experiences!

Ah, Bodie - it's all there, isn't it, but quite well-hidden from view.

Date: 2011-12-21 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maddalia.livejournal.com
This was a lovely fic. You conjured up such a vivid atmosphere in both scenes. I could feel the cold along with Doyle, the solace of the church, and finally the warmth and shelter of Bodie. I liked the little allusion to Eric & Ernie too -- what would a '70s Christmas be without them? *g* And I love how 'Bring Me Sunshine' reminds Bodie of Doyle.

Thanks for a great read.

Date: 2012-01-07 12:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Oh, thank you! Sorry I'm so late in responding. I'm glad you liked it, and of course, what else would be on the telly on a '70s Christmas Day?

Date: 2011-12-23 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
"Not today,thank you, I've got all the Tupperware I need."

*snert* so Bodie :D Aw, and Eric and Ernie too... lovely!

Date: 2012-01-07 12:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Ha - thanks! I didn't check, but I do remember my mum hosting a Tupperware party so it should have been about the right time, I think.

Date: 2011-12-24 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com
Nice! I like your use of Derby as a setting for the first part of the story. As well as being very descriptive it gives that edge of double meaning to the title. It's also nice to have them back where they 'belong' for Christmas!

Date: 2012-01-07 12:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Thank you! Do you know, the double nature of 'home' didn't hit until later? Dim or what...? Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

(Sorry I'm so late responding, btw)

Date: 2011-12-26 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liriel1810.livejournal.com
I reckon even Doyle sometimes needs a reminder of why they do what they do. They've both obviously been very good boys and gotten what they want for Christmas. Lovely little story and picture perfect ending.

Date: 2012-01-07 12:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Oh, thank you. I'm pleased you liked the ending - this was the picture I had in my mind at the start, curled up together in the warm.

Date: 2011-12-30 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] margaret-r.livejournal.com
I lovely, warming story. Good to see them together and at peace for Christmas:)

Date: 2012-01-07 12:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murphybabe
Thank you! Sorry to be so late replying. Everyone should have some peace for Christmas, no?

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