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Doyle raced along in the Capri, intent on only one thing.

Someone had taken Bodie and Ray Doyle was taking him back.

The radio crackled into life. "Alpha to 4.5."

He snatched up the mike. "4.5."

"Report to base. Immediately."

"Sir, I'm in pursuit-"

"The car you are following has diplomatic plates. You are to return-"

"I'm sorry, sir, I must be going out of range. I can't hear you."

"Return to HQ, 4.5!"

"Sorry, sir, I'll try another channel." He threw the mike down and, as an afterthought, turned the radio off.

He had a partner to snatch back.

Date: 2012-03-10 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Of course he has to snatch him back - lovely!

Date: 2012-03-10 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Yes - that's just our Doyle! *g*

Date: 2012-03-10 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hutchynstarsk.livejournal.com
Oh, wonderful! :D I can just picture it!! :D Like an episode.

Date: 2012-03-10 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
Go, Doyle! This was super. Thanks!

Date: 2012-03-10 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
Someone had taken Bodie and Ray Doyle was taking him back.




Date: 2012-03-10 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] potztausend.livejournal.com
I don't know how to write a heart, but I like the story too ;-).

Date: 2012-03-10 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillianorchid.livejournal.com
That's exactly what our Doyle would do! No one takes Bodie from him! :D Well done!

Date: 2012-03-11 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com
Ooh, the tension! Right, I want the rest of the story that goes with this *g*

Date: 2012-03-11 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etain-antrim.livejournal.com
Yeah for Doyle on a mission! Bodie will be back home in no time. Love the drive and urgency of this drabble.

Date: 2012-03-11 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ci5mates.livejournal.com
I could feel the tension in such few words, nice drabble. Of course Doyle would put Bodie first just as we know happened when the tables were turned!! Their first loyalty is to each other, Cowley second!

Date: 2012-03-11 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
Go, Doyle, go! Perfect capturing of the actions and feelings in just a few words. Well done!

Date: 2012-03-12 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornishcat.livejournal.com
It's important to always get your priorities right. Great storytelling. :D

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