[identity profile] squeeful.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
They were in a world of trouble. Doyle's hit and Bodie's nearly out of bullets, but the rain of gunfire won't stop just because they need it to.

"Hold on," is all he can really say. Please has never been a part of his vocabulary before this.

All his life Bodie has never had anyone he's cared about like this, not enough to give up everything. No one, not parents, not friends, not even the women he's professed to love. But now he has Doyle tucked up to his chest, blindingly trusting of him, and suddenly he gives a damn.

Date: 2012-03-11 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah, perfect. Our lads making it through together. Thank you.

Date: 2012-03-11 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
"now he has Doyle tucked up to his chest, blindingly trusting of him" I love the image here! Very moving!

Date: 2012-03-11 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etain-antrim.livejournal.com
I hope that help arrives in time for Bodie to live with his new awareness (and Doyle)!

Date: 2012-03-11 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornishcat.livejournal.com
Wow, that's quite an emotional read. I can feel Bodie's anxiety, now he has found something he really doesn't want to lose.

Date: 2012-03-12 09:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
Doyle's trust is wonderful but I am fretting that they are in such trouble...

Date: 2012-03-27 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlightmead.livejournal.com
I like this a lot: the Doyle tucked up to his chest, blindingly trusting of him all within that rain of gunfire. A sudden small centre of certainty amid chaos.

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