Discovered in the Fog - A Foggy Drabble

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Hurried footsteps stirred tendrils of fog lying along the cemetery path. Moisture crept in from the river, filling the morning with mizzle. Bodie wiped away the wetness collecting on his skin and hair as he chased his prey through the brume. He heard the rhythm of trainers on the pavement ahead of him but couldn’t see Doyle through the mist. Taunting words floated out of the miasma.

“C’mon, slowcoach!”

Bodie’s eyes rolled as he grumbled. ’Fancy a run?’ he asks. ‘It’s only a bit of fog,’ he says.

“Brekkie’s waiting.”

“Running all the way, mate!” Fog swirled in his wake.


Title: A Foggy Drabble (Dribble?)
Artist: merentha13
Slash or Gen: Slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: Sure
Disclaimer: Just borrowing the lads, no infringement intended

Comments

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was fun - well done you! *vbg*

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

You are quick! :-)

I had actually intended this to go a very different way - but a disaster at work is going to eat up my writing time this weekend, so a drabble it is - for now...

I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Hee - I'd just made a post to my lj and was about to go to bed, checked it and scrolled down - to find a new post at Dialj! And I couldn't resist some lads before bed... *g*

Hope your disaster isn't too disastrous - and you know there's nothing to say you can't post more than one thing for a challenge... *vbg*

[tango65.livejournal.com]

Clever Doyle, pressing Bodie's right buttons. Really nice drabble, thanks!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you! That old adage - "the way to a man's heart..." is very true for our Bodie and Doyle is not hesitant to make use of it :-)

[jat-sapphire.livejournal.com]

Awww! I enjoyed this treat at the end of the day! Thank you.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks.

[ali15son.livejournal.com]

how wonderful....thankyou for this.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com]

:-))))) ! thank you for making me smile this morning!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

A smile - my job here is done! Thanks.

[sw33n3y.livejournal.com]

Love the way Doyle's taunt acts to sweep away Bodie's dreamy fog. Nice one!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Doyle does have the know-how to "wake" his Bodie. ;-)

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

With just a few well chosen words you managed to create a very foggy atmosphere here! Well done.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I love playing with words.

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

Oh, you made me smile. It was just what I needed. Thank you. :-)

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

A smile is what I was hoping for - glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Nicely done. You have a way with just a few words. Thanks!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

I love the challenge of the "drabble" where every word counts. I'm glad this one worked for you. Thanks :-)

[cyanne]

Doyle knows how to get his Bodie. Lovely!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

That he does! :-) Thanks.