24th May - Discovered in Thirty Days and Thirty Nights: On The Same Page

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

“Tell me that's not Cowley calling us in.”     I only put my head on the pillow.
“He wants us at headquarters twenty minutes ago.”    At least you got in the bed.
“Isn’t it our day off?”    Hand me my jeans while you’re standing there looking pretty.
“Raymond, I’ll leave it to you to remind him.”    Shouldn’t you put pants on first?
“Ta. We’ve been on the go for the last month.”    None clean, haven’t had time to do laundry.
“You don’t need to remind me.”    That looks like it’ll be a might uncomfortable.

“Don’t know how he expects us to keep going without a rest.”    Adjust things properly and it’s not so bad.
“As you say.”    Poser.
“Yesterday was the worst. I almost shot the Smurf.”    You’re the one looking.
“Saw that shot ricochet.”    Hard to miss when you strut around like that.

“And so did Murphy.”    I don’t strut!
“Not happy, ol’ Murph?”    Bullshit!
“Didn’t stick around to find out.”     Jealous, you are.

“That’s me lad.”    Jealous of you? Don’t make me laugh.
“His Nibs wasn’t pleased either.”    Oi, that hurts me feelings, it does.
“I imagine not, replacing agents is expensive.”    Big tough agent like you has feelings?
“Remind him of that when we drop from exhaustion.”    Very sensitive, I am. It's my artistic side.
“Think he’ll care?”    Hand me my jacket and that’s not my favorite side of you.
“You know, deep down, he does.”    Oh, yes? Which side then? This one?

“Not likely.”    Naughty, naughty, Raymond.
“lt’s the case. Got his knickers in a twist.”    I don’t know what you mean.
“George will not be showing us any love if we don’t get moving.”    You’re a bloody tease, Doyle.
“He can do the other.”    You weren’t complaining last night, mate.
“Thirty days and nights on this job.”    First chance we’d had to do more than grab a kip.
“Should earn us a pay rise.”    Guarantee something’ll be on the rise tonight.


Title: On The Same Page
Author: merentha13
Proslib: sure
Disclaimer: not mine, only borrowing the lads

Comments

[cim3745.livejournal.com]

LOL! That's brillant - in more than one way. Marvellous! Thank you.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[ali15son.livejournal.com]

Very nice, thankyou.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[boothros.livejournal.com]

Ha ha, this is brilliant, very clever!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to put together.

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[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

This is *very* clever - inspired! Well done.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

I like your way of using the challenge titel. And the way you show us their so in sync that they don't need to communicate with words to understand one another. You really made me giggle again.

Oh, and you missed a quotationmark in your third line. *vbg*

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Giggling is good! Glad you enjoyed it.
( and thanks for the heads-up - there always seems to be one last thing to fix!)

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

That was so fun! What a great job (and idea)! Thanks. You made me grin.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Grinning was the goal! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[cyanne]

Oh for someone's sake!!! I can't believe I missed the first line letters when I read through it when you sent it to me. Some editor I am.

Brilliant job and this is very clever and such fun. Love the telepathy they've got going on.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

No words needed between them! Glad you enjoyed it.
(I don't think I had so clearly emphasized the first letters in the version I sent you - no need to feel bad :-) )

[paris7am.livejournal.com]

Laughing and smiling at this - so smart and so good. Thank you!

Shouldn’t you put pants on first?
❤️

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh that was cleverly done - very fun! Thank you! *vbg*