[identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
Warning: really not a poem!



"Bad for your ticker," he grumbles,
Chomping his muesli and slurping his milk,
Rolling his eyes at my full English breakfast,
Eggs and fried slice and the rashers all crispy
Sizzling sausage (just you belt up, missus!)
Marmalade toast thickly buttered
Washed down with a sugary cuppa.

He's good for my ticker,
Beating aware of him
Watching my back as we slog through the day.
(Hope we live till tonight!)

I think of the heat of him,
Hard morning thrust of him,
Affectionate rasp of his unshaven chin.

Breakfast's a happy gut memory.
My heart is replete all day long.



Title: Breakfast
Author: The Hag
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Date: 2020-05-28 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Perfect to wake up to - thank you, I love it! *vbg*

Date: 2020-05-28 08:55 am (UTC)
ext_9226: (snailbones)
From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


Perfect, thank you!

Date: 2020-05-28 09:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com
Affectionate rasp of his unshaven chin.
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. :-)

Date: 2020-05-28 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
No need for a poem!

I like it!
Edited Date: 2020-05-28 11:28 am (UTC)

Date: 2020-05-28 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
'just you belt up, missus!" - perfect.
Love the way you write the lads.

Date: 2020-05-28 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
Wow! This definitely *is* poetry! And I'm already tasting that bacon...

Date: 2020-05-28 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
That was delightful. Thank you!

Date: 2020-05-29 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paris7am.livejournal.com
Lovely! ❤️

Date: 2020-05-29 07:53 pm (UTC)
ext_1241: (Me&Beau)
From: [identity profile] jat-sapphire.livejournal.com
I love the images here. Rereading, thanks!

Date: 2020-05-30 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
I particularly love the way Bodie brings it all together in the last couplet, when you juxtapose how both his belly and his heart are full-fed - beautifully done! Thank you for sharing with us :-)

Date: 2020-06-04 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sw33n3y.livejournal.com
Love this! It perfectly illustrates some of the differences that strengthen their magnetic bond. Well done!

Date: 2020-06-09 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com
I love this!

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