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Sunlight and Roses
by The Hag

"For god's sake don't let the cats in here!" Doyle snarled.

"Wasn't going to." Bodie dumped a large package on the sofa and went to hang up his coat. "Parky out there. What's got your knickers in a twist this evening?"

"Trying to get these bloody presents wrapped. Can't seem to — "

"Cheer up!" Bodie undid the package. "Behold the answer to your thumbs-for-fingers misery!"

"What, gift bags? A bit pricey - still got loads of this paper left from last year."

"Yeah - that special offer, so flimsy we had to use it triple. Regular nightmare that was, and Castor getting the sticky tape round his back legs and hiding under the sofa yowling his stupid head off for hours. Forget your false economies for once and do it the easy way. What's that godawful mess you're working on?"

Doyle sighed. "Tin of Roses for Janice."

"Not for the family? She gets the lot?"

"She'll probably let you have one. It's the actual tin, really, one of those Cath Kidston designs, she loves them."

"Like brother like sister, eh? Collect any old — "

"Tins always come in handy."

"Well, give her the tin and let me have the choccies."

"Keep Cadbury's in business all by yourself, couldn't you?"

"Not with you supervising every morsel that tries to cross my lips. Like a perishing harpy."

"And what did you have for lunch, then? MaccieD's?"

"None of your business. Fancy a drink?" Bodie didn't wait for an answer. "Here you go. Stuff for the kids still need doing or shall I bag them?"

"Ta." Doyle raised his glass. "You come in handy as well sometimes."

"Thank you so very much." He started to croon: "I am your sunshine, your tin of sunshine, I make you happy when skies — "

Doyle rolled his eyes. "All right, all right. Suppose I can be a bit of a grey sky sometimes."

"Ah — you’re my thorn without a rose. Or a tin."

Doyle chuckled. "All prick, am I?"

"After dinner I'll get your knickers untwisted and you can show me."

[end]

December 16 2022


Title: Sunlight and Roses
Author: The Hag
Slash - Older Lads (Crackers et al universe)
Archive: Yes
Not mine, just borrowing them.

Date: 2022-12-16 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com

That was just adorable. Love Doyle all snarky and Bodie poking at him. Thank you!

Date: 2022-12-16 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com

I really love your older lads stories. Thank you for this one.

Date: 2022-12-16 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] f-m-parkinson.livejournal.com

I enjoyed this very much. Loved the final two lines...

Date: 2022-12-16 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milomaus.livejournal.com

Awesome story, so sweet and still them!

Date: 2022-12-16 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
That was fun, thank you! Love the ongoing older-lads! *g*

Date: 2022-12-19 10:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
I did — and it was successful! *g* I'm hoping to post about it any time now, but I was with a friend most of the weekend, and haven't had a chance to do anything much! Speaking of which...

...I also didn't clock when I read your story that you'd left the trailer outside a cut. Could you possibly hide it for us please? No worries about the story, because it's only wee (and perfectly formed *g*) but our one "rule" at [livejournal.com profile] discoveredinalj is please hide the trailer/potential spoilers! I know you don't have any spoilers, but people are such mimics... *g*

Date: 2022-12-19 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
How frustrating — thanks for trying. The only thing is that it's even worse to have it at the top where it will be read before the story — if you do get a chance, I'd appreciate it if you could delete that entirely!

I can see you've got the new lj rather than sticking with the old one — I must admit I wonder if that's connected with problems editing etc... I know I can't navigate between your posts and the previous and next ones on Dialj, because there's no longer links that let me do that. I can navigate between all the other posts like that though! I do wish people wouldn't muck about with things that aren't broken for the sake of being shiny and new. Lj was always so superior to the other offerings anyway!

Date: 2022-12-19 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Hmmn, for the cut... are you working in html, or with their new posting icon thingies? Some of their icons are nice and helpful, but some just don't work for me. I've stuck to my old-fashioned style through thick and thin so far, and I so prefer the words!

Date: 2022-12-16 11:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] krisserci5.livejournal.com

Delightful. . . simply delightful!!!

Date: 2022-12-17 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
Wonderful! Love your older lads stories.. and the cats!
Happy Holidays!

Date: 2022-12-17 03:49 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tinturtle
Yay!

Date: 2022-12-17 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
So cleverly written *and* funny, I don't know how you do it. Thank you.

Date: 2022-12-18 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
I love this universe soooooo much! And the dialogue crackles as usual.

Date: 2022-12-19 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
So do I! I was thinking about her last night.

Date: 2022-12-19 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agt-spooky.livejournal.com
Aww, that was wonderful, thank you! 😀

Date: 2022-12-23 01:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com

I love how you write them!

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