[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
Apologies to Slantedlight this time as technically speaking they are almost 3 seperate drabbles, tho' tis much better if you read them together.*g*

Hungover

“No sense in glaring at me, mate, no one forced you to do flaming Drambuies.”

Bodie was propping his head on his hands at the kitchen table. Doyle looked so charged up and bouncy from his run that Bodie’s first thought was to hit him and crawl back to bed.

Nope, no good, can’t reach the bugger with me fist from here.

“And you, you pillock, do them with Mackintosh.” Doyle clattered the dishes in the sink with unnecessary vigour as far as Bodie was concerned. “Who is Scottish and probably weaned on the stuff.”

“Now he bloody tells me.”

******

“God, but you look horrible.”

Bodie took his head off his hand at that because he’d almost forgotten what affection sounded like from the mouth of Ray Doyle, but there it was. In the smile, the relaxed posture against the sink, and in the mug of tea now being extended out towards him. He almost dropped the mug when Ray’s hand paused on his shoulder, and a thumb brushed the skin of his neck.

“I’m off. Go slope back under the covers and contemplate a life of sobriety..

“…’til next time.” They chorused together, and even Bodie managed a smile.

******

“Doyle?”

“Yeah?”

“Um.. call you later?”.

Doyle snorted.“No chance. Seen enough of your ugly mug to last a lifetime. You just drape yourself round someone else for an evening, mate, and I’ll see you tomorrow, 7 o’clock sharp. And don’t be bloody late.” The front door banged and he was gone.

Bodie drank his tea and sat back, shaking his head as much as he dared. The day he could predict his partner was the day his toes would curl up. The warm thumbprint was still there, though, as was the hot tea. A man could do a lot worse..

******

Date: 2007-09-22 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
Awwww, they're so damn cute together. Love that private interactions when they're at home. There's never been a more perfect pair than those two. *sigh* Thanks for another wonderful drabble.

Date: 2007-09-22 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
It suits them well. Can't have blood and bullets all the time.

Date: 2007-09-22 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
You cheated! *headdesk* Then again, it was rather a lovely cheat, so I guess I'll forgive you... *g*

Lovely couple of lines at the end, of course, the warm thumbprint, and the hot tea... just having something of Doyle there, how perfect can that be... *sighs happily*

Date: 2007-09-22 08:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bistokids.livejournal.com
I love it when they're affectionate like this - no big deal, just understood, and the little gestures meaning a lot. And hungover!Bodie is a cutie!

Date: 2007-09-22 10:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
I'm glad you cheated! Very nice, thank you.

Date: 2007-09-22 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
Only you could cheat so wonderfully. Very nice. And sweet. *snicker* Thank you for these!

Date: 2007-09-22 11:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
Flaming drambuies ... hahaha! I used to do flaming sambuca meself ... had the same effect. Love how Doyle *pretends* not to care, but does care oh so very much. Lovely, yay for cheating triple-drabblers!

Date: 2007-09-22 11:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] empty-mirrors.livejournal.com
Not a coddler, our Ray, just practical.

Lovely trio, thank you.

Date: 2007-09-22 11:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myrebelcat.livejournal.com
Now I want to imagine Doyle coming back that evening and draping ensuing. Or maybe the following night, because there was something he needed time to arrange instead...

Nice little threesome! I loved this line: "Nope, no good, can’t reach the bugger with me fist from here."

Date: 2007-09-23 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com
Ah, now as Cowley says: 'Some rules are just made to be broken.' Glad you took his advice. ;)

I thoroughly enjoyed all of this, all three. I would pull out a line or two but it was all so good and every word counts. But if I had to. It would the Bodie thought.Nope, no good, can’t reach the bugger with me fist from here. This had me giggling away.

Thank you so much for sharing these with us. :)

Date: 2007-09-24 09:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com
Yes, they do read well as a sequence, but they also stand alone very confidently! Lovely!

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