The only reason we spent those first Christmases on our own, was because we had constant hard-ons and never got out of bed." Doyle reminded him.
.....and lines like that made me spit out *all* my coffee as opposed to the usual half-mug - I could just *see* them like that, 'trapped' in bed....
And the pictures. I loved the way you interspersed them with the writing....and Bodie in his leathers....and Bodie and mud....and Doyle and mud.....too much to bear at lunchtime and a great idea.
So, so clever and nicely done. You got them reminiscing about a whole bunch of classic scenes - and how wonderful to have them in front of us as the lads are talking about them! Just made my day.
Oh, yes! You know, one of the things I love best about the discoveredinalj challenge is the clever ideas people come up with! I loved this. It's all warm and cozy--shows them with a lovely future--and then all the eye candy to go with the memories! *g* And, oh, just look at how they look at each other--like no one else exists.
I think I liked this line best of all: "...that's just because we've always had a very passionate relationship, one way or another."
ah, the Christmas flashback episode, what a great idea! A lovely little conversation between the (cosy!) lads and then the pictures speaking for themselves. Nice juxtaposition between all those dangerous, angsty situations and the two of them all bundled up in the warm together. Clever you, perfect for the challenge.
This was such a cute idea. I loved having the story with the pics. You did a great job with both. Thanks so much. The idea that they're still together after all those years makes me happy.
Very sweet and cozy. Appropriate for the season. I love that you added the pics to remind us of those classic scenes. It made everything that much more enjoyable. Thanks!
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Date: 2007-12-06 03:12 pm (UTC)The only reason we spent those first Christmases on our own, was because we had constant hard-ons and never got out of bed." Doyle reminded him.
.....and lines like that made me spit out *all* my coffee as opposed to the usual half-mug - I could just *see* them like that, 'trapped' in bed....
And the pictures. I loved the way you interspersed them with the writing....and Bodie in his leathers....and Bodie and mud....and Doyle and mud.....too much to bear at lunchtime and a great idea.
Thanks so much for doing this.
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Date: 2007-12-06 03:19 pm (UTC)A brilliant idea - thank you for this.
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Date: 2007-12-06 08:40 pm (UTC)I think I liked this line best of all: "...that's just because we've always had a very passionate relationship, one way or another."
Absolutely. Thank you very much!
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Date: 2007-12-07 05:46 am (UTC)Thank you. I really enjoyed reading it.
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