Drabble Challenge - "Lost"

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Title: Lost
Author: schnuffi
Slash or Gen: Slash
Word Count: 100
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: Yes please
Author's Name for Archiving (if different to above): Schnuffi
Disclaimer: Alas, I don't own the lads, I just play with them now and then. And they never complained so far *G*
Notes: Written for the April Drabble Challenge - my prompt was 'Glasses'


Lost

Bodie’s heart froze when he rounded the corner and saw the open car, Doyle’s sunglasses abandoned on the sidewalk. His blue eyes searched the surroundings frantically. What had happened here? Where was Ray? Bodie checked out the car and then picked up the glasses, running one thumb around the frame. He looked around again. The neighbourhood seemed totally deserted. But somewhere out there was his other half, possibly hurt and maybe even worse. But wherever Doyle was, he’d find him. He always did. And may God have mercy on those who hurt his partner, for he sure as hell wouldn’t.

Comments

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

What? He lost Doyle? Nooooooooooo!!!!

Great fic. Only a hundred words, but you've packed so much into it.

And I really need him to find Doyle now...

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Awwww, thanks! So glad you like.

And trust me - he will find him. Sooner or later. And then there'll be smut *G* Which doesn't mean I'll write some *WG*

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

And then there'll be smut *G* Which doesn't mean I'll write some *WG*

Where's your community spirit? You have to write it *g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Make me *WG*

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

*backs off nervously*

See, I don't know you well enough to know all your weak points.

I'll have to pass on that, and hope that you feel guilty enough about disappointing me that you'll write it.

*g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Now that was a smooth retreat *snicker* Guilty? Me? You must be kidding. Tell you what - if you write the smut following "Coming Home" I'll try to find Doyle for you. Deal?

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

'K. Deal. *spits on hand*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

*Spits on hand and slaps yours* Just found Doyle but I'm not sure where... erm... it's too bloody dark in here *G*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

*Prods* Hey, where is your sequel!!! I posted mine now it's your turn. Or I'll keep the rest of the story to myself and you'll never find out what happened to Doyle!

[londonronnie.livejournal.com]

That's the trouble with drabbles - I always want more! What's happened to Ray!

This is a great fic - thanks!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I have not idea yet what happened but who knows - maybe I'll see the light before the end of the challenge *G*

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

Hee! How did you know that Protective Bodie is just about my favorite version of him? There is a longer story to tell her, m'dear. And I have a feeling you're just the woman for the job. ;-)

So start writing.

(no pressure or anything...)

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

A hunch, my dear, just a hunch *G* And I AM writing! Impatient lot *wanders of grumbling*

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

*wanders of grumbling*

Just so long as you're grumbling and writing...

;-)

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Hmpf...

[birggitt.livejournal.com]

You... you...

TEASE!!!!!!!

What happens to Doyle? Where is he? What's Bodie gonna do?
I DEMAND more.
Pretty please?

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

DEMAND??? I knew I shouldn't have started this. Gluttons - all of you! Bah! *off in search of Doyle*

[birggitt.livejournal.com]

Gluttons we are. But you show us the candy. Are we those to blame?

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

ROFL! Nice little toadie!

[bistokids.livejournal.com]

Well, I'm not going to say anything about writing more.

Just - this is beautifully written, so much worry and anger conveyed in a few words, the sense of Bodie's isolation and, oh I don't know, incompleteness without Doyle.

Oh and I lied before. I do that sometimes. Pleeeease tell us what happened to Ray?!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

*Rolls eyes and mutters to self*

[andreathelion.livejournal.com]

ROFL, told you so .... we need to know, what happened to Ray!
Off to the sequel :)
Edit: Oops, did I told you, I love it ? Yes, I think I did, but again and official :D

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

*HEAD*DESK*

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

i like it. angst, mystery, protective, all in one bite.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Yay, glad you like it!

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

Ohhh, that was really good! It definitely needs a sequel!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

It already has one - "Alive". There might be more tomorrow *G*

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

You're writing?
Don't want to disturb you!
"And may God have mercy on those who hurt his partner, for he sure as hell wouldn’t."
Details please!!!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

You'll just have to read the sequel and wait for more like all the others. *G*

[probodie.livejournal.com]

That last line!!! Superb.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Awwww, thanks! I always wanted to use that line and this was a nice opportunity *G*

Btw, did I mention that I absolutely lover your icon?

[probodie.livejournal.com]

It wasnt made by me, but it is great innit? For when I'm feeling peed off at het and genners! LOL

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

LOL - good point! I stick to this little cutie here in such cases *G*

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Ah... a tantalising drabble, making us imagine... Thanks! *g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thank you! So glad you like it. It was a good prompt *G*

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

That really is a complete story there, because I *know* he'll find him! *applauds*

Thank you!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

So glad you like it - thanks! *off to read yours*