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[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Author: Kiwisue (KWS for archiving, please)
Title: Tied
Genre: Slash
Pros Lib/Cırcuit Archive: Please
Disclaimer: Not mine


Doyle wanted to handcuff Foley, but Bodie stopped him.

"He'll be out of those in seconds. Seen his show."

Bodie tripped Foley to the floor. Using one of Foley's own ropes he hitched a length around his wrists, working the remainder with dazzling virtuosity, loop intersecting loop, over, through, around. With another, he suspended Foley by ankles and toes from a bolt in the wall.

Doyle watched, fascinated.

"Where'd you learn those knots?"

"Hojojutsu. Japanese rope work." Grinning. "Teach you, if you're interested."

Doyle managed to slip a single slick white cotton coil into his pocket on the way out.

Comments

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Interesting little piece. Especially given the last sentence... Now I'd like to know how long it would take Bodie to teach Doyle all the right knots *VEG* Thanks for sharing!

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Thank you, especially for the VEG!

You can help me, actually - was it clear that Foley (who was supposed to be 'Snake' Foley, until I ran out of words) was an escapologist?

Bloody Drabbles - never enough words!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Well, it was clear to me after Bodie told Doyle that Foley would get out of the cuffs.

And I know exactly how you feel. I always seem to have 2 or 3 words too many and start cutting. I hate it.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

It's a good kind of hate though, for me at least. Concentration!

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Nice! Love the thought of what comes next with Bodie, Doyle, and the rope in his pocket.*g*

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Hee - very glad I've been able to give you such thoughts!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love the expectation of it - you know what's coming, as soon as we find out Foley's an escapologist... because the lads belong together in bed with rope... *g* Thank you!

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

because the lads *belong* together in bed with rope...

Oh yes, most definitely *g*. I hope I start a trend.

*wanders off, happily musing about the Lads and rope*

[andreathelion.livejournal.com]

Hmm, I would love to be the fly on the wall, when Doyle put the rope out of his pocket *g* Nice thought, anyway *EG*
Thank you for sharing!

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Oh, wouldn't that be nice. It's my favourite situation *g*.

Thanks!

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Love this - love the thought of Bodie teaching Doyle the art of tying *g*

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

*g* I'm not sure that Shusai would approve - although, then again, maybe he would *WEG*

I wish I could write that scene, but I lack the practical knowledge to carry it off. Sadly, it's a rather specialised area.

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

"He'll be out of those in seconds. Seen his show."

As soon as I read this sentence I thought he must be an escapologist. I enjoyed this, especially where you use just one word to create a whole scene like 'fascinated' and 'grinning' - I can just *see* them standing there with those expressions. Very nice. Thanks.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you liked the words. I wanted that compressed lick of excitement... and anticipation :)

Thank you!

[bistokids.livejournal.com]

Mmm the slash is strong in this one! *g*

Bodie's actions reminded me of a mating ritual by some brightly coloured bird - 'see what I can do, babe!' Doyle nicely hooked. Lovely!

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Oh I adore that image! claps hands with glee

Thank you!

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

You little devil! And I don't know if that comment is directed towards Doyle, Bodie or you. *g* Very nice. It's complete, yet sets the scene for what is to come. Good job.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Why, thank you ma'am *g*

I like bistokids take on it - Bodie performing (yet again) for his Doyle, and Doyle being mesmerised by it, while retaining the presence of mind to grab an 'opportunity' for later on.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

oh, a touch of bdsm. love it.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

You know, I hoped you'd like this. I'll have to think of more... no problem, it's a kink of mine too!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

cool. sharing is good!

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

*applauds* Again, a complete story in just 100 words. Nice set up, delivery and pay off.

Bodie's showing off -- he could have done something simpler -- and apparently it's worked! *mind wanders off to next scene*

Thank you!

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Oh, grand, thank you - the pay off in drabbles is the hardest bit to get right.

*mind wanders off to next scene*

Aaargh! That's where my mind has been all day - people will keep mentioning it!

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

Well... perhaps you need to ask for another challenge and pursue it! *bats eyelashes*

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

*giggle* Love the icon.

Will think on't - no promises, mind!

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

Never has to be a promise. This is supposed to be fun!

Of course I have that icon... I'm known for my bunny lobbing, pokey stick skills and pimping people's stories. If only I were known for my writing *sighs* :D

[londonronnie.livejournal.com]

Love the way that Bodie plants the seed in Doyle's brain, and then Doyle makes all the plans for later... Not that Bodie didn't know what he was doing all along... *g*

Very nice, I liked this a lot.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Not that Bodie didn't know what he was doing all along...

First version I wrote was too long and it wasn't obvious to me what he was doing. I guess I uncovered his motives *heh*

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

A lovely drabble and it whets our appetite for what could come later :)

Thanks!

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much :) momentarily distracts self with thoughts of later. Mmmmm.

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

Oh, good drabble! Love that ending sentence! :)

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Glad you liked.

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

I'm all hot and bothered just by the idea of Bodie saying "hojujitsu" .. heh! Who's going to tie up who though? or perhaps that should be "whom" ... loved it!

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Ah, I haven't decided. It's different every time I think about it.... goes off to think some more.... byeeee!

[msmoat.livejournal.com]

Right, so, I read this yesterday but was way too busy (and overwhelmed by everything) to comment. But, there I was out running this morning and what should pop into my head? Why, that last line of yours, of course! So, er, thank you! *g* Well done.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Oh, now that's a lovely compliment *bg* Thank You!

[cyanne]

Mmmm, I love what you led up to. Very nicely done.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much.

[justacat.livejournal.com]

You know, I really just don't like drabbles much; I say that all the time - and yet I always have to eat my words when I read yours. You have a gift! So much in so few words... I just love:

Doyle watched, fascinated.

Yes, that's it exactly; so perfect...

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Yes, that's it exactly; so perfect...

*jumps up & down*

I'm glad you liked that bit! There were words I got rid of that would have told a fuller story, and things I changed to get the word count down, but that phrase stayed in because it was so central. Bodie performing (and I love what bistokids said about that), and Doyle reacting - what is he doing???. Sorta/kinda the whole point *g*.