Drabble Tree Challenge

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Note: Non-writer type person doing writer type things. Please make allowances. Hope I've done this right.
Carrying on from schnuffi's last word -- flaring.


"Flaring? I'm not a bloody horse!" Bodie stopped struggling as Doyle’s teeth ran over his sensitive neck. Bucking up to meet his warm skin, he breathlessly added, "maybe hung like a …”

Doyle bit down gently, smiling at Bodie’s exaggerated ego and the resulting shudder. Thrusting his hips down, he tightened his grip on the thick wrists, pressing them deeper into the thick carpet as he pushed himself up to read his lover‘s expression.
Sent.
“Still, your nostrils do flare when you're angry. It’s one hell of a turn on!”
“Not angry now.”
“No, just gorgeous.” Wetly kissing his mouth.

Comments

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Non-writer type person??? You gotta be kidding, mate.

Everybody seems to be obliging me today by writing smut - love it! And Bodie's nostrils do indeed flare when he's angry. Thanks for jumping in!

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

Of course we oblige you... you go around holding a Bodie gun to our heads.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Who, me? *hides hands behind back and whistles*

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

No allowances needed. You're too modest. It's a gorgeous image you're projecting :) Love it.

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

"Flaring? I'm not a bloody horse!" Bodie stopped struggling as Doyle’s teeth ran over his sensitive neck. Bucking up to meet his warm skin, he breathlessly added, "maybe hung like a …” Brilliant opening line - so Bodie-like! ( and I'm working on a 'mouth' one as we speak - can't resist*g*). Thank you for sharing this here.

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

For someone who is a "non-writer" you have some lovely stuff going on here. ♥

That first paragraph is just *so* in character!

Thank you!

[bistokids.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmmmmmnice! :D I was too much of a coward to take on 'flaring'! - and you used it beautiflly. (have to admit, bit of a personal kink having the boys restrain each other in this way).

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Hey, you wrote = you're a writer! Yeay for drabble challenges, and especially well done on the flaring! *g* Thank you!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

I think you painted a nice, sexy picture here. Thanks.