Drabble Tree Challenge

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

 crimson_37's last word was mouth. Oh the things we could write about that! And yet, look what I did...

Shhh, I'm not really here.

Mouth opening and closing, eyes open wide; it takes a full thirty seconds for Bodie to realise that Doyle is in shock.

 

Gently pulling him by the shoulders, he steers Doyle into a chair and sits him down, pouring him a drink.

 

He presses the glass into Doyle’s hand. “Here. Get that down you.”

 

Doyle lifts it to his lips and splutters as the fiery liquid hits the back of his throat, bringing him back to his senses.

 

He looks at the table and then up at Bodie, bewilderment in his eyes.

 

“But….. you’ve never cooked dinner for me before!”

Comments

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Not bad for somebody who's not really here. I knew you wouldn't be able to resist *snicker* If Ray's in shock over Bodie cooking dinner I wonder what will happen once he sees what happened to his kitchen *G*

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Lol, you know me so well already :D

I hadn't thought about the kitchen. Let's hope it's Bodie's flat *g*

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Okay, if you're not really here, should we whisper our thanks and our praise??*g* Nice build-up to the punch of the last line. Hee!

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

S'ok, I'm here now *g*

Glad you liked it :)

[probodie.livejournal.com]

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH so didnt expect that!!!

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Neither did Ray, obviously!

*g*

Speaks to figment of her imagination...

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

Sporfling like a sporfling thing!

Thank you! ♥

Just like Sam Tyler does every day...

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it, you sporfler :D

[bistokids.livejournal.com]

Hee! Wonderful build-up - the first line had me quite concerned! Lovely.

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Sorry to concern you. No, I'm not really *eg*

Thanks! :)

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

Hehe! "bewilderment in his eyes"
Looks like Bodie isn't even capable to cook some tea!
Very good! Me too, I was a bit conerned in the beginning!

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

I think Bodie would rather eat it than cook it.

:D Thanks!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Heeeeeee! *vbg*

Thank you!

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

*vbg* back atcha!

Thanks!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

It's after that shocking dinner I'm curious about! Well done. Thanks.

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Well, aren't we all? But we're not supposed to do sequels ;)

[halotolerant.livejournal.com]

*chortle* I dread to think what Bodie cooked/incinerated. Lovely little twist :D

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Thanks Halo ♥