Drabble Tree Challenge
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What can I say? I'm a drabbling fool.. I used
hambelandjemima's last word 'before'.
This is a little 100 word coda to 'The Rack'.
Before Doyle can reset the locks Bodie pushes him onto the door handle. He opens his mouth to swear but Bodie’s tongue fills it and his groan becomes erotic.
Doyle smells of the Thames, where he sat and rubbed his knuckles for hours. Yet Bodie is kiss-biting his jaw, clearly oblivious. Bodie’s palm finds the ache in his kidney while the other finds his neck.
Their breathing is loud and uneven.
Doyle fists Bodie’s shirt in his hand, lays his head down on that wide shoulder, and knows he has never heard anything so hopeful in his whole fucking life.
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This is a little 100 word coda to 'The Rack'.
Before Doyle can reset the locks Bodie pushes him onto the door handle. He opens his mouth to swear but Bodie’s tongue fills it and his groan becomes erotic.
Doyle smells of the Thames, where he sat and rubbed his knuckles for hours. Yet Bodie is kiss-biting his jaw, clearly oblivious. Bodie’s palm finds the ache in his kidney while the other finds his neck.
Their breathing is loud and uneven.
Doyle fists Bodie’s shirt in his hand, lays his head down on that wide shoulder, and knows he has never heard anything so hopeful in his whole fucking life.
******
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Date: 2008-04-19 08:53 pm (UTC)I have to admit though, that I didn't understand your other one. Think I have to see at least one ep to get what an r/t is and why everyone refers to everyone else by a number. LOL.
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Date: 2008-04-19 09:04 pm (UTC)One day I'll get you some episodes burned. And you can do some Torchwood for me..*g*
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Date: 2008-04-19 09:10 pm (UTC)three seven sounds so much better than the way i was reading it- three point seven. :0
*off to read again*
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Date: 2008-04-19 08:28 pm (UTC)Thanks. I enjoyed that. :)
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Date: 2008-04-19 08:43 pm (UTC)Oooh, that's just... ♥
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