[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
What can I say? I'm a drabbling fool.. I used [livejournal.com profile] hambelandjemima's last word 'before'.

This is a little 100 word coda to 'The Rack'.


Before Doyle can reset the locks Bodie pushes him onto the door handle. He opens his mouth to swear but Bodie’s tongue fills it and his groan becomes erotic.

Doyle smells of the Thames, where he sat and rubbed his knuckles for hours. Yet Bodie is kiss-biting his jaw, clearly oblivious. Bodie’s palm finds the ache in his kidney while the other finds his neck.

Their breathing is loud and uneven.

Doyle fists Bodie’s shirt in his hand, lays his head down on that wide shoulder, and knows he has never heard anything so hopeful in his whole fucking life.

******

Date: 2008-04-19 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjames-centre.livejournal.com
Oh I love that, Sheila.

Date: 2008-04-19 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjames-centre.livejournal.com
I like to drop by. :)

I have to admit though, that I didn't understand your other one. Think I have to see at least one ep to get what an r/t is and why everyone refers to everyone else by a number. LOL.

Date: 2008-04-19 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjames-centre.livejournal.com
*scribbles madly*

three seven sounds so much better than the way i was reading it- three point seven. :0

*off to read again*


Date: 2008-04-19 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
This is pure bliss. I love you!

Date: 2008-04-19 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] towerbridge2006.livejournal.com
Very nice. I'd like to pamper that sore kidney, but I'll let Bodie give it a go!

Thanks. I enjoyed that. :)

Date: 2008-04-19 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draycevixen.livejournal.com

Oooh, that's just... ♥

Date: 2008-04-19 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
I'll never look at a door handle again in the same way.....I loved this. Thank you!

Date: 2008-04-19 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hambelandjemima.livejournal.com
Ah, lovely :)

Date: 2008-04-19 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunray45.livejournal.com
Love it!! Love that Doyle can find comfort with Bodie and that Bodie is more than willing to give it. ;)

Date: 2008-04-20 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
Oh, cool. A nice, sweet bit of lovin'. And door sex. Thanks.

Date: 2008-04-22 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jgraeme2007.livejournal.com
Oh, I like that one a lot!

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