Drabble Tree Challenge
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Using
hambelandjemima's last word "Soon" so she can in turn write more smut. Here is the promised "Sweat" *BG*
Heat
Soon, too soon they would be back on the streets again, fighting for their lives and those of others. But not tonight. Tonight it was as it should be. Tonight they were together, moving in unison. So close to each other – inside each other – as if they were but one entity. Heat slowly rising to a peak, their bodies melting together, soft skin against soft skin, their heartbeats in perfect rhythm, hot breath on silky hair. Their souls soaring up together in a rocking climax, shaking their world. Reluctant to let go their lips met, kissing off the lingering sweat.
Can I have breakfast now?
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Heat
Soon, too soon they would be back on the streets again, fighting for their lives and those of others. But not tonight. Tonight it was as it should be. Tonight they were together, moving in unison. So close to each other – inside each other – as if they were but one entity. Heat slowly rising to a peak, their bodies melting together, soft skin against soft skin, their heartbeats in perfect rhythm, hot breath on silky hair. Their souls soaring up together in a rocking climax, shaking their world. Reluctant to let go their lips met, kissing off the lingering sweat.
Can I have breakfast now?
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Date: 2008-04-20 08:32 am (UTC)I love it all, but especially the first line. It's so them; it's what they do.
Btw, did you mean 'souring' or 'soaring'?
Enjoy your brekkie!
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Date: 2008-04-20 08:35 am (UTC)Everybody can have a play with "sweat". It just happens to be that you'll be the first one *G*
Anyway, glad you like it - I got carried away a bit after the first sentence. That was not what I wanted to write. They sneaked into my head again, telling me what to do *deathglares at B&D*
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Date: 2008-04-20 05:21 pm (UTC)You can now have any meal you want...
Bodie/Doyle sandwich?Reluctant to let go their lips met, kissing off the lingering sweat. Lovely.
Thank you! ♥
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Date: 2008-04-20 05:27 pm (UTC)Glad you like it!
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Date: 2008-04-20 05:33 pm (UTC)I hate being at least five hours behind most of the people on my flist... *shakes little fist at GMT*
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Date: 2008-04-21 03:16 pm (UTC)But I'm glad you like - thanks for reading and commenting!
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Date: 2008-04-21 03:24 pm (UTC)Mind you, I'm not complaining!
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Date: 2008-04-21 03:26 pm (UTC)Good for you that you're not complaining. You are the smut queen after all *G*
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Date: 2008-04-21 03:30 pm (UTC)Innocent and decorous, that's me. My drabble didn't have a bit of smut in it, did it? Ha!
Of course, what people thought might have happened next is totally their own fault. *g*
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Date: 2008-04-21 03:34 pm (UTC)