May Day! Part Six

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

"Stop that!"

Doyle chanced a quick glance over at Bodie, who sat stiffly in the passenger's seat.

"What?" Doyle answered curtly, eyes darting to the mirror again.

"Stop looking like somebody's following us."

With a roll of his eyes, Doyle said, "Somebody's following us."

Bodie relaxed and grinned. "Brown Cortina? Three cars back?"

"Berk," Doyle groused. "Yeah."

"Better lose him before we meet with Marty."

"Right."

Bodie raised an eyebrow when Doyle continued to drive on without making his move. "Problem?"

"Big one." When Bodie started to turn his head, Doyle said, "Don't turn around!"

"Why not?"

"Turn you into a pillar of salt, mate."

"Oh, Christ. Is it one of ours?"

"Ours?" Doyle said bitingly.

"Not all the lads would be against us," Bodie said sagely. "Even if-" He shrugged.

"Even if they knew?"

"Yeah."

"Then why is one of our lads following us?"

"Cowley's orders, of course."

Doyle let out a cold chuckle. "Cowley's orders, of course."

Bodie glanced at Doyle, who looked back intently. They stared at each other for a moment before Doyle's gaze returned to the road. Bodie put a hand on Doyle's arm and asked, "Why did Cowley shake our hands?"

Doyle shifted down into third. "Same as before. We're expendable."

"Bloody hell. Have had enough of that, you know."

"I know. Hold your breath, sunshine. We're going to have a chat up with our former fellow agent. See what sort of talk is going round the hallowed halls of CI5."

The Capri roared forward when Doyle mashed the accelerator.

Comments

[sunray45.livejournal.com]

I cannot write!! Just no imagination or something, so don't look to me.

Only wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this RR. The story is getting more exciting by the minute.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

It is a bit daunting with the great writers here. I'm happy your enjoying everybody's efforts. I am as well.

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this part. Doyle's comment about the pillar of salt made me giggle. And I liked the reference to Cowley's hand shake and the lads being expendable. You did a great job! Thanks for sharing!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

I appreciate your taking time out of your hectic vidding and manip schedule to comment. *g* Thank, C!

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

LOL! You're very welcome! *g*

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

You delighted me with this: "Stop looking like somebody's following us."

With a roll of his eyes, Doyle said, "Somebody's following us." and with the pillar of salt bit, so spot on for the lads.

Thanks! ♥

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Oooh, yes!! Nothing like a sparky bit of car dialogue to pick the pace up! Like others have commented, you echo back to the previous bit nicely with the handshake remark, and to canon with the pillar of salt. I love the idea of them being followed now. Thank you, Kat.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is getting better and better. What a clever move to have them being followed which of course they find out immediately. And very clever connection to canon too with pillar of salt and double meaning hand shake. Hm - I think I want to contribute a tiny short bit here. Hope it'll work... *takes big sip of coffee and deep breath at same time and splutters all over the place* Dammit - it's too early for this!

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Oooh, the tension's hotting up now! And, like draycevixen, I had visions of Gene Hunt and Sam Tyler following the lads *g*

Lovely dialogue. I wonder which agent has the unenviable task of keeping tabs on the dynamic duo...

[heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com]

Excellent stuff! I second (or third) the "following us" and the "pillar of salt" - lovely! Can't wait to see what happens ...

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the kind remarks. I had a good time with the story. It's interesting to see who'll do what next!

Go for it! You'll be fine. A RR is supposed to be fun for all so don't worry. I have faith in you.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thank you for reading and commenting. I happen to love LOM so that's the vision I had when I made mention of the car. Maybe it's Gene? LOL! Hey, a crossover. *snirk*

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Don't you just love car scenes? Thanks, hon. I'm happy you enjoyed my little bit.

Isn't it funny how in our fandoms the car scenes are where lots of good bits are disclosed? Guess it's because the boys are captive and finally talk!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

I don't envy whoever's following them! Not very good of him/her to be spotted to quickly. Of course, our lads are good at their jobs. And even better when they only have each other to rely on.

Thank you for reading. I appreciate it.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much. I too am anxious for the next part.

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

It's a crossover that's already been done a few times in LoM land, with great success. :D