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May. 15th, 2008 12:57 amBodie shoved him into the half-open door, which swung shut with a head-rattling crash sending a new constellation of stars orbiting in Doyle's head. Doyle tried to stand up, but Bodie was pressed up against him, closer than before, pinning him against the solid wood.
"Bastard," Bodie murmured, for the third, or maybe the fourth time.
Doyle tried to speak, but the words were stuck somewhere deep in his throat. He groaned instead. And winced with pain, as Bodie grasped his jaw and his thumb pressed into the exact spot where his fist had landed, moments earlier.
"Why'd you do it, Ray?" Bodie's voice was louder now, rough with…. something. Doyle searched Bodie's face, looking for a clue. He saw blue eyes staring back at him in an impassive face. Nothing to read there. No anger, no pain, nothing to guide him. Just Bodie. Implacable and deadly serious.
"Was… we're doing it wrong, Bodie. Didn't mean to hurt you … but …have to think properly."
The fingers holding his jaw relaxed a little.
"I'm listening."
"You want to tell Cowley everything. I didn't – still don't. But we have to stop arguing about it. Gotta find the photographer, sort him out. Fix it. We do that, and you still want to put Cowley in the picture… talk about it then. OK?"
"Maybe."
It was like talking to an iceberg. Bodie didn't react. Then something broke open inside and he felt himself falling into the crack, surrendering himself. It was blessed relief and it hurt like hell.
"No… I'm sorry. I'm a complete idiot. Can't be trusted if I won't trust you, right? We'll do it together."
Heart thudding, he waited. Then Bodie's expression switched from grim to grin as he dragged Doyle away from the door and pushed him towards the bedroom.
"Bodie! Wait! What are you doing?"
"You are going to lie down. I am going to make an icepack for your face and drink some of your gin. Then I am going to lie down beside you and we are going to talk about what we do next." Bodie's grin widened. "I think we might communicate better if we’re both horizontal."
"Bastard," Bodie murmured, for the third, or maybe the fourth time.
Doyle tried to speak, but the words were stuck somewhere deep in his throat. He groaned instead. And winced with pain, as Bodie grasped his jaw and his thumb pressed into the exact spot where his fist had landed, moments earlier.
"Why'd you do it, Ray?" Bodie's voice was louder now, rough with…. something. Doyle searched Bodie's face, looking for a clue. He saw blue eyes staring back at him in an impassive face. Nothing to read there. No anger, no pain, nothing to guide him. Just Bodie. Implacable and deadly serious.
"Was… we're doing it wrong, Bodie. Didn't mean to hurt you … but …have to think properly."
The fingers holding his jaw relaxed a little.
"I'm listening."
"You want to tell Cowley everything. I didn't – still don't. But we have to stop arguing about it. Gotta find the photographer, sort him out. Fix it. We do that, and you still want to put Cowley in the picture… talk about it then. OK?"
"Maybe."
It was like talking to an iceberg. Bodie didn't react. Then something broke open inside and he felt himself falling into the crack, surrendering himself. It was blessed relief and it hurt like hell.
"No… I'm sorry. I'm a complete idiot. Can't be trusted if I won't trust you, right? We'll do it together."
Heart thudding, he waited. Then Bodie's expression switched from grim to grin as he dragged Doyle away from the door and pushed him towards the bedroom.
"Bodie! Wait! What are you doing?"
"You are going to lie down. I am going to make an icepack for your face and drink some of your gin. Then I am going to lie down beside you and we are going to talk about what we do next." Bodie's grin widened. "I think we might communicate better if we’re both horizontal."
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Date: 2008-05-14 03:13 pm (UTC)LOL! I love Bodie's reasoning. Thank you for getting the lads back together, working as partners -- the way they should be! Good job on this part. Thanks.
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Date: 2008-05-15 09:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-14 03:30 pm (UTC)Ooh very nice! :D Like the sudden change in Bodie and his attempting to move this relationship along again as well as your pick up on the plot.
Thank you! :D
I'm tempted to claim this -- there's an idea tearing away at my brain cells after reading this bit -- but I suspect that everyone is hoping for a little PWP at this juncture and that's not where my feral little brain is going... well not entirely.
There WOULD be secksin.
So... I'll hang back and see if anyone else wants to take a whack at it.
*attempts to tie down the part of me screaming "but damn it I want this, I really want this"*
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Date: 2008-05-15 09:37 am (UTC)I would've liked to have seen that - especially with the 'secksin' *g*. But callisto's done a lovely job.
Save the idea for a rainy day - no good smut allowed to be wasted.
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Date: 2008-05-15 12:48 pm (UTC)I think I'm going to hijack the idea for a LoM story I'm working on. I think a lot of my ideas are better suited to that fandom. No bunny ever wasted! :D
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Date: 2008-05-14 04:06 pm (UTC)And I love how you got them together and heading for the bedroom - with just the right amount resolved between them and just the right number of issues outstanding.. lovely!
No please, after you! *doffs hat*
Date: 2008-05-14 04:32 pm (UTC)Bugger!Nah, that's alright. You don't have to tie me down!Unless I get to pick who ties me down. *points at icon*I think I've taken a whack at this RR far more recently than you have and my Mother raised me to a nice young lady
not much stuckso I will politely step aside.*gnashes teeth**goes back to fighting off angsty Pros bunny of doom*
Re: No please, after you! *doffs hat*
Date: 2008-05-14 04:38 pm (UTC)I think I've had more than my share of this RR anyway...
Date: 2008-05-14 04:46 pm (UTC)My feral glint was linked to a very odd idea involving the combining of the sex scene WITH plot... so... window of opportunity closed I think. *g*
Re: I think I've had more than my share of this RR anyway...
Date: 2008-05-15 09:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-14 04:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-15 10:37 am (UTC)And it was very warm sex that callisto provided, wasn't it! Nothing like a little fun between the sheets to wobble things back to something like normal. Now for the photos....
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Date: 2008-05-14 05:52 pm (UTC)*sits back and waits for
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Date: 2008-05-15 10:50 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-14 07:28 pm (UTC)Okay, time for some actual plot next I suppose.*g*
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Date: 2008-05-15 10:51 am (UTC)*stares around, guiltily* Errr... it'll just get messed up again, right?
Glad you caught the PWP opportunity.
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Date: 2008-05-14 10:53 pm (UTC)Then Bodie's expression switched from grim to grin
It's going well!
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Date: 2008-05-15 10:53 am (UTC)As always, I really appreciate your comments.