May Day: Part 18

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

"So that talk about talk was just bollocks then, was it?" inquired Doyle from the bed, trying hard to keep his face straight and his voice even.

Bodie had disappeared while Doyle made his way to the bedroom. Now he was back and leaning on the doorjamb wearing nothing but an erection and a smile. To complete the picture, he had a gin and tonic in one hand and half a tube of lubricant in the other.

"Not at all, mate. We'll talk. 'Course we'll talk about what to do next." Now the smile was pure evil as Bodie pushed off the doorframe. "Next is your clothes off, the lube on, the bedspread rumpled and a few knocks on the headboard for good measure."

How something so utterly prosaic and unromantic could have Doyle lying on his back and wriggling out of his jeans as fast as his thumping heart and suddenly dry mouth could manage, he did not know. Mid wriggle he remembered something and stopped.

"Oi,"

Bodie had put his drink and the lube on the bedside table and was busy getting Doyle's shirt off. He would not be deterred and a wet, pinching sensation shot straight to Doyle's groin as Bodie's tongue swirled and teeth bit down on his right nipple. Doyle struggled for his train of thought.

"Ice," he managed on a groan. Collecting himself when Bodie raised his head, Doyle slid his hands to either side of that flushed face and held him there. "Ice," he said again, smiling and pulling Bodie forward to rub noses with him. "You promised me an ice pack, you neanderthal." He kiss-bit the exact same spot on Bodie's jaw that ached on his. Bodie stretched away to Doyle's left, so Doyle played his hands around Bodie's ribs and back, loving the feel of muscle and bone as he always did. A chink of teeth on glass caught his attention and he turned his head on the pillow.

"What're you-"

His answer was Bodie back in his face with an ice cube between his teeth.

Doyle swallowed and shook the last bit of denim off from his ankle.

"A nutter, you are," he said, breathless and more than a little stunned by the prickling in his eyes. Bodie bent his head. Once, twice... and Doyle had no choice but to close his eyes and savour a sensation of tender cold on bone and skin that was as erotic as any he had ever known. When Bodie slid the ice cube along his jaw and pushed it onto his waiting tongue, he thought he might come there and then from the suck and slide of that chilled, beautiful mouth on his. The ice cube had little chance of survival in all that heat and Doyle wrenched out of the kiss which had melted it so completely.

"Mate, you want any chance of using that lube and the headboard.."

Before he'd finished his sentence Bodie was turning away to lie on his side. " 'M not wasting... nice strong headboard... get a fuckin' move on."

Neither lasted long enough to do the lube justice, or damage the headboard. But balls-deep inside Bodie, in the pause before the storm which he always fought to hang onto for every universe-stopping second, Doyle knew it didn't matter. Two seconds, two minutes, two lifetimes. He'd take whatever he could get with this man; photographs, blackmailers and sodding keys be damned.

Comments

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Whew! What a hot piece of writing. I'm definitely warm now. This was tender and funny and snarky and just delightful. Thanks!

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Kat, I'm thrilled it was tender and sarky for you - always my goal! I just decided to have a little fun with the whole 'ice' thing. Heh.

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

Oh, my, I've come over all peculiar....I think this was one of the neatest, cleverest (if that's a word) and most originally written sex scenes I've read in a long time. You always manage to achieve a delicate balance between non-slushy romance, eroticism, poignancy and lump-in throat-touching moments such as these: A nutter, you are," he said, breathless and more than a little stunned by the prickling in his eyes..... at the same time managing to keep the reader's feet planted well on the ground with intermittent flashes of humour: now he was back and leaning on the doorjamb wearing nothing but an erection and a smile.

Very nicely done. Thanks!

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you so much for your very kind, eloquent comments. I'm so happy you saw all those things in it - it's always a challenge when you are writing this fast and can't make it too long. And the idea of Bodie wearing nothing but an erection and a smile just made me giggle immediately, so I'm very happy you picked that out.*g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

I knew this would be worth waiting for *G* I love that complete balance between humour, hot sex and deep down emotion. And that sex was damn hot. Love the play with the ice cube. Ice cube and whipped cream have always been some of my fav sex toys *G* And I absolutely adore the last line. Was about time Doyle made up his mind.

Thanks a lot for a fantastic morning read. And now excuse me - I need a shower. Preferably a cold one *EG*

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I'm very happy I could heat up a chilly morn for you! Could not resist a little ice-cube play after kiwisue set it up so beautifully with mention of an ice pack for Doyle's jaw.

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Ah, nothing starts the day better than a hot piece of PWP. Love the way you converted talk of an ice pack into sexy ice cube play. And I bet Ray's jaw feels much better for it ;)

Bodie wearing an erection and a smile, holding a g&t and a tube of lube... well, it's every CI5 agent's wet dream, isn't it? :D

And seeing as this has been up for, ooh, at least nine hours, I'm claiming the next part. :)

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. I could not resist the ice...( And neither could Bodie:)). Bodie wearing an erection and a smile, holding a g&t and a tube of lube... well, it's every CI5 agent's wet dream, isn't it? LOL!!! Absolutely. And yay you for stepping up and claiming the next bit, I am so enjoying this.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Excellent! So glad you managed to catch the ball - I tried to do my part at lunchtime here so you'd see it first thing, but the bloody phones wouldn't stop ringing, and home was its usual busy - to cut it short, I didn't post until 1 am!

I adore the image of Bodie "wearing nothing but an erection and a smile" *g*. And the ice cube was a 'cool' idea (sorry!!!).

Waiting eagerly to see what Hambel comes up with.

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Thank you - and thank you especially for the ice cube !! Would never have thought of it if you hadn't referred to Bodie getting an ice pack for Doyle's jaw - see the naughty place it took me:))

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

Two seconds, two minutes, two lifetimes. He'd take whatever he could get with this man; photographs, blackmailers and sodding keys be damned. oh I love the sentiment of this ... it's all love and danger mixed up, just like the lads! I'm glad you gave them a little stop-off with ice and ... stuff so they can gather themselves for what's in store *g*

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Thank you Jo, glad the sentiment was there, love and danger is them all over really. And yeah, they needed a stop-off, nothing like a well-placed ice cube to stop the plot for a bit.*g* And now it's lovely to see them at the kitchen table puzzling it all out again.

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

Ah so they have, in fact, done this before... always interesting to see what directions a RR goes in!

Cocky *cough* Bodie is a treat as is the business with the ice.

Thank you! :D

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

.. and thank you for letting me PWP to my hearts content.*g*

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

That was excellent! Very hot! Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you found it hot. Plot is not my strong point, so I was waiting for a sex scene I could pounce on.*g*