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A little Christmas story - Part one

It was slightly foggy outside while Bodie and Doyle where driving home from their last assignment. The radio was playing Driving home for Christmas and it was starting to snow.

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Suddenly there was a suspicious noise and the car came to a halt. "What was that?" "I don't know Bodie. Let's get out and have a look."



They climbed out of the car

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and Bodie grabbed that chance to throw a snowball at Doyle.

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"Oi, you clot. We should work on the car, not on the snow." Doyle opened the bonnet and they looked inside.

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"Get me some of the tools from the boot, will you?" Doyle asked. Bodie went around the car and looked if they had something in the boot they could use.

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After twenty minutes Doyle cursed. "I can't fix it." "Well, so let's call HQ, they will sent the breakdown lorry and pick us up." Doyle looked shocked. "Never, Bodie. You know very well what will happen then. The Cow would expect a full report on why the car has broken down. No, you go and call Andrew and tell him he should get here and help me. Then you can take the bus and drive home and heat up the bathroom."

So Bodie walked to the phonebox to call Doyle's old friend Andrew, the mechanic who sometimes helped him fix his bike.

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"Andrew. It's Bodie. Our car has broken down and Doyle needs some help. Yes, we tried, but we can't fix it on our own. We don't have the tools we need." He gave Andrew the address where Doyle and the Capri were and then climbed onto the bus which would take him home.

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Two bus stops in front of his apartment he saw a Christmas tree seller. "Well, that would be a nice surprise for Doyle to come home and the Christmas tree is already there." He got off the bus.

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The salesman had a wide range of trees. Small ones, medium-sized, large and very large. Bodie instantly fell in love with the large and very large one. But he knew he had to go home and measure the height of the room before he could buy a tree.



The whole time Doyle was waiting for Andrew to come to the rescue. He thought about going to the phonebox himselfe and phone Andrew again when he heard the bike.

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He was lucky that Andrew had all tools they needed. After fifteen more minutes he was ready to drive home.


When Bodie got home he used the folding ruler to measure the height of the room.

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"Yes, the large one would fit perfectly. It would be nice to have a very large Christmas tree this year." He left the house again and went to the Christmas tree salesman. On his way there he started building a snowman.


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But he knew that he didn't have enough time and stopped playing around. He walked the distance to the salesman very fast and was lucky. The large and the very large tree were already waiting for him.

He bought the large tree and tried to take the bus home. But the tree wouldn't fit.

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"Oh shit, I'll have to ask Doyle to pick me up. So much for the surprise. But then I'll take the biggest tree that is there". Bodie took his R/T out and called Doyle. "Can you pick me up, please? I'm two blocks from home." "Yeah, I'll come, mate."

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When Doyle arrived Bodie stood beside his tree, chatting with the salesman. "Bodie, what have you done?", called Doyle. "Oh, I only bought the Christmas tree", Bodie grinned.

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"And how are we gonna get it home?" Doyle asked. "Well, I thought we could put it on to the roof of the car....." So they tried

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and after a few snags they fixed it onto the roof.

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The rest was easy. They drove home and carried the tree into the living room.

"Let's have champagne, Bodie. I think we've earn it."  "Yes, Doyle, but wait and see how beautiful the tree will look when we've decorated it."




Endnote: To be continued on December 19th.

Date: 2018-12-09 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
This priceless!! What a terrific idea - and all the details you added - the snow, the tools in the boot, the phone box, the bus, their flat. Amazing! Thank you so much for sharing this! I love it.

Date: 2018-12-09 04:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] krisserci5.livejournal.com
FABULOUS!!!!!!!

I so so love this ! Thank you :)

Date: 2018-12-09 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cim3745.livejournal.com
Yeah another story of the lad's home life - great. Love the part with the snowball and snowman :-) and I can't wait for your sequel.

Date: 2018-12-09 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com
Brilliant! I'm looking forward to the 19th! :-)

Date: 2018-12-09 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siskiou.livejournal.com
Lovely story and amazing details! It must have been so much work! A labor of love!

Date: 2018-12-09 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
LOL! This IS priceless! :-)
Love the story and the childish Bodie - and everything! :-)
And the details are superb. This folding ruler is very well done. Tell your co-worker he has done a splendid job, will you?
And what a cosy home. Is that the new carpet we bought together? :-)

Can't wait till the 19th! :-)

Date: 2018-12-09 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
Wow! So much work has gone into this! It's lovely to see it all "acted" out, as it were. It's great fun, and fabulous. Can't wait for the 19th! Thank you!

Date: 2018-12-09 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ali15son.livejournal.com
lovely story...thankyou.

Date: 2018-12-09 06:33 pm (UTC)
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Date: 2018-12-09 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
What a clever and original way to tell a Bodie and Doyle story! So much painstaking work for you. And I love the way you introduced Driving Home for Christmas! I love seeing Martin Shaw dance, such a different view of him and one which always makes me smile. Thanks for all your work here.

Date: 2018-12-09 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loxleyprince.livejournal.com
Fabulous! Of course Bodie would throw the first snowball and stop to make a snowman! He's a big kid at heart! I love how the snow clung to Doyle's hair! :-)
Very nicely done! I'm really looking forward to the next instalment on December 19th!

Date: 2018-12-09 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
ha, I can absolutely see them getting side-tracked by a snowball fight in the middle of a car breakdown! *bg* :-)

Date: 2018-12-09 10:45 pm (UTC)

Date: 2018-12-09 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
This was delightful! You did such a good job with all the bits and pieces, and a good story too! Can't wait for more!

Date: 2018-12-10 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
That was fun - and I loved Driving Home for Christmas at the start, too! I felt a bit sorry for the salesman in his shorts in all that snow though... *g* Shall look forward to the 19th!

Date: 2018-12-10 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiorenza-a.livejournal.com

What fun! I loved this adventure - I might be missing for the 19th, but I'll make sure to look out for the sequel when I can catch up.

Date: 2018-12-10 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunray45.livejournal.com
I really love this! So much detail you have put in the scenes, and the story. Looking forward to 19th. *bg*

Date: 2018-12-10 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com
So clever - I'm really looking forward to the 19th!

Date: 2018-12-10 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milomaus.livejournal.com
So good to see the Lads havingvsome fun. And snow! Yay!
Great story!

Date: 2018-12-10 02:28 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cyanne
So cute! Love all of the little details and it tells a great story, it was lots of fun. Thanks!

Date: 2018-12-10 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airelle1.livejournal.com
Awww!!!!! Every year you amaze me with your delicious lads and their environment. Such a lovely story, and so many cute details in your diorama! I really love what you do with these, and I'm looking forward to your post every year. Thanks for sharing them with us.

Date: 2018-12-10 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dawnebeth.livejournal.com
adorable and I bet it was so much fun to construct the scenes!

Date: 2018-12-11 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigchill83.livejournal.com
An ingenious and fun idea. And there's more! looking forward to it.

Date: 2018-12-12 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com
Oh wow!!! I absolutely LOVE this 🤗
So many great details and so much love you have put into this!
Look at all those mechanic tools in the boot of their car (pity they didn't have the one they needed to fix the car); the folding ruler; the glasses of champagne on their coffee table... and so much more!
And of course Bodie would be the one stopping to play with the snow 😉. He's such a kid, and so endearing at that! It looks like the lads are going to have a happy, cosy Christmas.
Well done! Thank you x
Edited Date: 2018-12-12 03:02 am (UTC)

Date: 2018-12-30 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com
Very nice! I love the attention to detail in every one of these tableaux. Andrew must be a very good motorcycle rider to be riding out in the snow!

Thank you.

Date: 2019-01-11 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sw33n3y.livejournal.com
Oh this was so much fun! It's lovely to see the lads' Christmas adventures continue! Heh, hope the baddies don't find out that Bodie is easily distracted by snow. :D

Thanks for the story.

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