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Changing Partners



Another day, another Christmas party – I don’t even know whose party it is.


The only thing I know is the clothes and songs are different to yesterday.
And somehow, this dreamy and soulful music is getting under my skin.
Shit, the music’s making me go soft – that’s never happened before !
And anyway, where is my bloody partner ?




I still have these pictures in my mind of yesterday, at the Squad’s party……


I remember it clearly……..


Ray was dancing as if there were no tomorrow – with Betty.


He´s always such a good dancer – but why Betty ?


…and he’s been so bloody relaxed.  He really deserves to be happy – but why with Betty ? 


Damn, I need another drink now.


“Here you are, mate”
Oh stop looking at me like that, Ray – hope his mind reading skills aren’t working tonight.


“Looks as if you´re dreaming, sunshine!”



“Wanna dance, with me ?”




DIALJ 2018 –  prompt ‘ Music Floats’

Date: 2018-12-27 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Oh, I love it. Great combination of pictures and text. I really can hear Bodie's mind and how lucky he is to get Ray. Very well done!

Date: 2018-12-27 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
*happy sigh*

This is lovely!
The pictures fit so perfectly to Bodie's little sad story!

Thank you,
and I hope you have a wonderful Christmas time. :-)

Date: 2018-12-27 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
Yes, yes, that is exactly what is going on in those photos. *g* Really perfect. Thank you! That was fun!

Date: 2018-12-27 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
I really like this! The whole idea and all the lovely photos matching the text adds up to a very imaginative creation. Well done and thank you.

Date: 2018-12-27 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
You're very welcome! I love all the photos and the words are perfect!

Date: 2018-12-27 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ali15son.livejournal.com
how lovely..thankyou

Date: 2018-12-27 05:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] jat-sapphire.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love seeing these thoughts ho through Bodie's head.

Date: 2018-12-27 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
Aww - look how they are looking at each other!! Especially in the eighth one (the first of them together). A wonderful little story with the perfect pictures to illustrate it. Well done!

Date: 2018-12-27 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com
Really, really good! I love the images you've chosen and the text that goes with them. They fit perfectly. Well done ;)

Date: 2018-12-27 06:29 pm (UTC)
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Date: 2018-12-27 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loxleyprince.livejournal.com
Very cleverly done!
So glad the lads ended up together. :-)

Date: 2018-12-27 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com
Brilliant, and perfect! :-)

Date: 2018-12-27 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com
Thank you! And I love your icon. :-)

Date: 2018-12-27 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milomaus.livejournal.com
Oh yes! Great fotostory, I love it!

Date: 2018-12-27 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hambelandjemima.livejournal.com
I love this :)

Date: 2018-12-27 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
That's perfect! It's exactly what all those pictures mean together - I love it! Thank you! *g*

Date: 2018-12-27 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] golden-bastet.livejournal.com
Awwww... how sweet is that? Doyle would never leave Bodie hanging too long. (And Bodie would never leave Doyle hanging, either.)

And Happy Holidays to you!

Date: 2018-12-28 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com
Oh, it's lovely - very well done!

Date: 2018-12-28 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
Brilliant! I love your clever choice and sequencing of images, they work perfectly for your story - impeccable result! *vbg*

Date: 2018-12-28 12:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilda-elise.livejournal.com
The pictures fit perfectly. Thanks for a lovely story!

Date: 2018-12-29 02:22 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] krisserci5.livejournal.com
Yes, the answer was YES - he does want to dance with Doyle. . . . did I get it right?

Date: 2018-12-29 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airelle1.livejournal.com
Wow! That was absolutely lovely and the pics are as gorgeous as the text!

Date: 2018-12-31 02:32 am (UTC)
cyanne: (Pros Bodie & Doyle)
From: [personal profile] cyanne
This is wonderful. You picked perfect pictures to go with the story and I love a happy Bodie and the idea of them dancing (closely) together.

Date: 2019-01-03 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com
Splendid storytelling in the way the images are ordered, and the connecting narrative. I really enjoyed this.

Date: 2019-01-10 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sw33n3y.livejournal.com
Hee, love the scenario you've created here. It's a perfect Christmas party lads' scene. (Apologies too, for being so late to the party)!

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