Four Things Bodie Forgot

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I haven't read or commented yet on so many stories because I've been working frantically on my own (I'll get to it--I swear!).  Luckily, I finished in time.  

For your reading pleasure, I give you Four Things Bodie Forgot (and One He Didn't).  It's holiday tinged, yet covers a lot of ground overall.  My prompts were champagne and Christmas crackers.  I owe a huge debt of gratitude to callistosh65 and przed.  I hope you like it.

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Happy New Year, Everyone!

 

 

Comments

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Oh, I really enjoyed this. I love the idea of our Bodie picking out who he sees as the best, and only the best for our Bodie.
I really enjoyed the whole bit from when the doorbell rang at two in the morning, and how it panned out too.
And boy, oh boy, wasn't that last bit hot. It was so well written I could almost feel Bodie's hair catching on the paintwork around the door frame as he moved.
I loved the end. Doyle cradling Bodie running his fingers through his hair. That just doesn't happen enough in fic I think. I mostly read it the other way around. So thank you for that, and thank you for sharing this story.

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you! I've been playing a bit with having Ray's words (typically pretty fierce) and his actions (far gentler--particularly with Bodie) work in opposition. One of the things I love best about Doyle is his temper, yet he's not a cruel man. Most especially when it comes to his partner. :-) So, I'm very pleased you liked that last bit.