Drabble Challenge: Remember

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Title: Remember
Author: Probodie
Genre: Pre-slash
Proslib/Circuit/Hatstand: Yes
Disclaimer: Sadly not mine, I just like to play with them
A/N: I was given the prompt ‘mouse’.



“Sir,” I’d said as I stood in front of Cowley.

“Ahh, 3.7. You took your time getting here.”

I’d opened my mouth to protest but he’d interrupted me.

“Time to meet your new partner. Agent 4.5. or Raymond Doyle.”

I’d never even realised there was someone else in the room! Turning, I’d spotted a scruffy individual leaning against the wall.

I remember thinking that Cowley had gone mad, partnering me with that.

I remember looking him up and down.

I remember him staying resolutely silent.

I remember thinking I’d got a mouse for a partner.

How utterly wrong I was.

Comments

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Ah, a first meeting. Doyle the mouse??? *snort* Guess Bodie soon found out that he was partnered with a big, mean cat *G* Love it!

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Oh yes indeed he did *g* Thanks for liking it.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

i like it. bodie learned that lesson. thanks.

[probodie.livejournal.com]

He did learn the lesson *g* Thanks.

[londonronnie.livejournal.com]

Has Bodie ever been more wrong? I don't think so... *g*

Nice take on their first meeting!

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Nor me *g*

Thanks btw.

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

Utterly wrong indeed! Our Raymond a mouse?! Perish the thought. *g*

Thanks, hon. First impressions can be fun, can't they.

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Hee first impressions can be so wrong, too!! Thanks, glad you liked it.

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

A mouse! LOL! Boy, was Bodie wrong *g*, I like first meeting stories, you did a good job with this drabble! Thanks for sharing.

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

I remember thinking I’d got a mouse for a partner.
How utterly wrong I was.
Heee - Doyle the mouse! That was well clever for the prompt, I'm impressed! *g*

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Weeelll it wasnt my first thought. My first thought was to have one of them stood on a stool being terrified of a mouse, but then I had second thoughts - as, like that would be too obvious. So there you have it *g*

Thanks, though, glad you liked it.

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Oh, Doyle does like to lean *g*

And you shouldn't go on first impressions, Bodie ;)

Lovely drabble.

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Like a rent boy he is, I love that he leans where ever he is!

Adn thanks, glad you liked.

[kiwisue.livejournal.com]

Well done with the prompt! No, Bodie hasn't got himself a mouse, has he *g*

[probodie.livejournal.com]

He certainly hasnt!! LOL Thanks.

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

That works so well because of how people react to the two of them in the show. You can tell they're always surprised when Ray "goes off" on them.

Thank you!

[probodie.livejournal.com]

I know, they get such a shock when he does LOL

Cheers.

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Hee - Ray the mouse! Very nice reflection of their first meeting.

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Thank you :D He didnt stay mouse-like for long did he? LOL

[andreathelion.livejournal.com]

Lol, Doyle a mouse. Fatal mistake, Bodie. But me thinks, Ray quickly disabused him of the thought *g*
Thank you for sharing :)

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Oh indeed he did :D Thanks for commenting.

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

Your firth thoughts would be fun too: "them stood on a stool being terrified of a mouse".
These hard men - would have been a glorious picture! :-)

But so it's better! I love 'first met' stories!
Thanks!

[probodie.livejournal.com]

I might still write it!! If I get time *g*

Thanks, glad you like it and I too love first met stories.

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

Yes! Please do write it!

Any tips for more first mets????
With the help of prosfinder I've found some - but there must be more... :-)

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Okay, it's written and over at my LJ!!!

Tips for first mets? You mean stories? Or...sorry, not sure what you mean.

[bistokids.livejournal.com]

Lovely, very visual, description - it's easy to picture this playing out in this way (the scruffiness, the up-and-down glance). Really enjoyed this, thanks.

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it:D

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

I bet Doyle squeaks sometimes though *g* Nice drabble!