Drabble Challenge - "Conclusion"

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Sheesh, never thought you peeps could be such a pest. As I want some peace and quiet again I did finish the drabble series I so innocently started last night. Stop sniggering! All of you! So here is the last part and I mean last part. After that there's not much left to say really. The splatter part is your own fault - you asked for a conclusion so go live with it!

Title: Conclusion
Author: schnuffi
Slash or Gen: Slash
Word Count: 100
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: Yes please
Author's Name for Archiving (if different to above): Schnuffi
Disclaimer: Alas, I don't own the lads, I just play with them now and then. And they never complained so far *G*
Notes: Written for the April Drabble Challenge - Final to "Lost", "Alive", "Hunting" and "Close"

Conclusion

He heard the roar of the gun and jerked. Something wet splattered his face and he blinked. Bright daylight was streaming through an open door farther down the hall. Framed by the doorway was a familiar figure with a face like a thundercloud. He looked down. The body wasn’t far from his feet and half its head was missing. Approaching footsteps and then strong hands grasped his face. Doyle relaxed and slumped heavily against his partner.

“What kept you?” he mumbled against the broad chest.

“You forgot to spread bread crumbs,” came the dry reply as Bodie held him close.

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You know what the best part about all this is? I had the complete series finished since last night, just waiting to be fed to you in bits and pieces *WG*

Um... I think I have some important things left to do. Far away from LJ and my laptop... Cheerio! *turns and runs*

Comments

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Ah, yes, we needed that, thank you!! And I love the line about the breadcrumbs.*g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

You're most welcome. Hope you're satisfied now as I honestly ran out of drabbles. Thanks for bearing with me.

He, thought the breadcrumbs line was something very much Bodie-like in this situation. Guess he'll give Doyle hell about not waiting later on.

[birggitt.livejournal.com]

Oh, amused, uh? Weeeell... I am not!
You were evil!
But, I forgive you because we still have the story ;-D
He! Half head missing, uh? That's my Bodie to the rescue, LOL!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

ROFL!!! That bugger looks like Catweazle having a nervous breakdown!!!

Not amused? So you didn't have fun following the bread crumbs? *WG*

As Doyle pointed out in LAA they should give Bodie a gun with smaller calibre. But hey, better the bad guy's head than Doyle's, right? It was quite a close call after all.

[birggitt.livejournal.com]

Yeah! I kinda like her. you can't deny she's pretty good at make her feelings clear =D

Well, I could have some fun... except you forgot to tell us that, actually, we were following bread crumbs! *laughs*

Nonononononono! No smaller calibre for Bodie! I like Bodie with his big gun =D
And I like Bodie and his gun always ready to come for Doyle *wg*

I'm sorry, I couldn't help it. I like mess with words. Yes I know, I'm twelve *laughs*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Don't worry - I love cheap puns *G*

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

Yay! Our hero saves his man!! *sighs in relief* I loved all your drabbles in this little series. And that last line was perfect, so very Bodie! :)

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

You didn't really expect me to kill Doyle, did you?

Thanks for reading them all - I'm very happy you liked how the whole thing developed.

Bodie would've said something like that, wouldn't he? I actually heard him say it in my mind. Yeah, I keep hearing voices and they sound suspiciously like those two...

[ankaree.livejournal.com]

You didn't really expect me to kill Doyle, did you?

Naw, I totally trusted you with the lad *g*. Bodie had perfect timing!

Bodie would've said something like that, wouldn't he?

Oh, yes! I so hear Bodie saying that. I just love his dry sense of humor!

I actually heard him say it in my mind. Yeah, I keep hearing voices and they sound suspiciously like those two...

LOL!! And they won't leave you alone until you write what they're saying. The persistent buggers :)

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Yeah, or until I start banging my head against the nearest wall.

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

Love the breadcrumbs "off-handed" line combined with the holding close. Thanks! :D

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Hehe, thank you for reading and commenting. I did enjoy this little tour immensely, mainly because of the wonderful feedback *G*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

PS: Just added you to my f-list - hope you don't mind *G*

[snailbones.livejournal.com]

You're evil, but I love you! *g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Lol, thank you! I definitely take that as a compliment.

[londonronnie.livejournal.com]

And they all lived happily ever after...

You are a little devil, though...

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Who, me? *tries to look innocent*

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

You minx!

Love the bread crumbs line and the strong arms and Bodie blowing away the bad guy that hurt his Doyle...

Great series :D

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Hehe, thank you. And thanks for following me through with this *bows*

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

Uffff!

It was fun! ;-)
Thanks!
(And from now on 'bread crumbs' will have a new meaning for me...)

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it. Thought you was bored when you yawned at me *G*

Just imagine the lads as Hänsel and Gretel *VEG*

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

Fear!
You know - those fairy tales are sometimes so cruel!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

They are indeed... *VEG*

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

what great fun this was, clever and entertaining.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed my rambling *G*

[msmoat.livejournal.com]

I am hopelessly behind. But thank you for the concluding bit--blood splatter and all. *g* I enjoyed them all!

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Yay, thank you!

[smirra.livejournal.com]

“You forgot to spread bread crumbs,” came the dry reply as Bodie held him close.
The braed crumbs spreading wouldn't be the problem for our ever chewing Bodie.

Love that line. Nice series of drabbles.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Well, it's kinda hard to spread bread crumbs when you're unconscious... But then again Bodie might manage *G*

Thanks, glad you like.